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Author Name: PremiumByronBabe 10 Comments
Date Added: January 17, 2013 19:01:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Ode to Avalon

Ah, sweet Avalon

such revelry you bring

the radiance in your smile

eclipses the flowers of spring


Ah, sweet Avalon

your eyes of velvet brown

alight with fairy magic

relegates the deepest frown


Ah, sweet Avalon

your tresses of amber curls

outshine the midday sun

cares abandoned when it swirls


Ah, sweet Avalon

such a winsome, loving tot

the apple of your daddy’s eye

and all your mommy sought

Author's Notes:

For the dreamer...

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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on February 17, 2013 09:19:44 PM Report

I really enjoyed your beautifully penned poem.

It is so heart felt it leads me to believe it is about the beautiful baby in your profile picture.

Whether it is or not, the poem is lovely.

Linda

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 25, 2013 01:43:40 PM Report
GReat poetic tribute to your dreamer, kid... Love IT!...unca len
Comment By: FreeBrian Dziokonski on January 19, 2013 12:04:05 PM Report
Simply Beautiful, Absolutely gorgeous! Loved it, Brian
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 18, 2013 06:18:21 PM Report
A romantic tone and a beautiful, quaint piece! Love it!
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 18, 2013 10:00:28 AM Report












Stunning verse dear Kym!


Comment By: FreeTomahawk on January 18, 2013 09:55:00 AM Report


Absolutely lovely, Kym, you've woven a tapestry of love here. You rock!


 


Len

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 18, 2013 09:50:02 AM Report
Avalon,magical.mystical a place of legends,I also like the inclusion of the apple of her daddys eye as is Avalon a reference to the welsh word for apple or should I say affol as they say, its a long time since I read of those Arthurian legends (school days in fact) but they did spur the imagination as does your poem Kymberly a beautiful piece if I may say so,thoroughly enjoyed~Graham.
Comment By: PremiumDean on January 18, 2013 08:15:08 AM Report
My daughter's big brown eyes and sweet smiles do the same thing to me.... adorable and very sweet poem. Loved it, ~Dean
Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 18, 2013 05:44:50 AM Report

Adorable flow and rhyme -- a wonderful piece of adoration.  Excellent and heart-warming.

 

Alistair

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on January 17, 2013 08:48:29 PM Report
This was a very enjoyable read and hypnotically rhythmic. Would this be about your child Kym?  Hugs,   Henry




 


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