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Author Name: Premiumsheedreams 6 Comments
Date Added: January 21, 2013 22:01:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Insanity
 
Overdue decisions often rise up
 into the throat
 creating a calm heart but seem to shout inside
 like the first aha! moment.
I am...
Determined to avoid foolish arguements!
 
Tell me the sky is red if that is your reality,
I will honor you.
Truth is easily expressed, eagerly understood.
While embellishment and untruth are loosely woven fabrics;
White cheesecloth to collect the truth
and strain out the lies.
 
Time always tells the truth.
So why not let time be our judge?
I am...
Determined to listen, forgive, and forget.
I have nothing to prove so take me at my word.
Recrimination is insanity
that builds a bitter and unapproachable wall
between two hearts.
A defensive move might be valued in sports,
keeping your opponent from scoring
but...
 love is not a game...
 
and
 there are no winners in foolish arguements.
 
 
Author's Notes:
this poem was inspired by Tomahawk's recent post, The Black Flame.  A good poem makes one think and reason...and usually inspires other writings.   What is your take on "The Black Flame"?  Be sure to check it out for yourself and find your own inspiration...
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on June 11, 2013 05:05:25 PM Report


Linda if we can cure insanity.


There would be no poetry


but a lot of cross words


spoken. 


Dan is writing and reading today because of insanity.


Good tune up for me.

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on April 30, 2013 01:05:06 AM Report

I must read his pieces.. My curiosity is now up.. As to yours.. BRAVO.. Interesting intake... Love how you brought it forth... Once again you made magic..

 

Luv ya me HH Sista

 

Moonie xo


Comment By: FreeAlistair Muir on January 23, 2013 02:01:21 AM Report

Bravo L.J..  So well expressed.  Loved every word --

 

Alistair

Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 22, 2013 02:02:00 PM Report
A fine and meaningful poem.  A remarkable perspective on insanity.  A human thing.  Something real.  --David 
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 22, 2013 10:35:08 AM Report


I read the poem Black Flame...it's awesome  ...

just like this poem insanty how it drives the crippling mind of thoughts and emotions.

Great to see you writing again...

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumDean on January 22, 2013 04:09:53 AM Report

I think you have beautifully delivered one of the best take on 'insanity'. The beginning and the end tie amazingly. " a calm heart that seems to shout inside, can only believe that love is not a game, hence will bear most of the burden.... loved it, ~Dean








 


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