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Author Name: Freepoematic 6 Comments
Date Added: January 29, 2013 19:01:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hands Will Remain Stained

Hands Will Remain Stained

 

 

Obstructed the alleyway you used to come out,

So you canít go anywhere

 

Robbed your eyes you used to look,

so you canít see nobody, nowhere

 

Glued your feet to the back of your thighs

so you canít make any moves as such

 

And stolen your hands stuck on my heart

so you canít touch other hearts, no more

 

You want to go? Go then --

and take your scent with you Ö

it hurts my senses

Bloody nostrils --

Why donít they stop bleeding?

 

You broke your promise once

Tortured my heart

I would release your hands help stop bleeding otherwise!

 

Hands on my heart

Soaked, coloured red

Youíre going to witness the last fading beat

Then,

You will be released

The hands are yours again,

Tho' will remain stained

 

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Comment By: Freeleahlopez on December 4, 2013 02:33:46 PM Report

Dean,

My, wow, very emotional. Just like She Whispers I have tears. In fact I have a waterfall going on. Such a deep moving poem about the hurt a relationship can cause. I am sorry my best friend to know the pain you have being through. I know you are strong-minded, you have proved it. My love for you is forever more.

 

MITZEE

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 20, 2013 02:56:07 PM Report


AS I read tears filled my eyes....I know of this kind of pain

been there a few times and its misery thats hard to for get..

WE all suffer but we learn not to be so trusting....Wishing you happiness when the time is right..

 Hugs My dear ~ INdia

Comment By: FreeKatie on February 15, 2013 06:30:57 AM Report
Someone hurt you it seems from your writing, this piece is powerful and wonderful.  Well done.  Katie


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 6, 2013 12:09:30 PM Report
This voilent write is quite disurbing. I don't understand most of it, but the violence is unmistakable...Creepy!!...len
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on February 5, 2013 06:44:52 AM Report
This sounds very personal and painful Dean, its gut wrenchingly harsh in its entirety, I hope its fictional as the reality would indeed be brutal, yet I know you possess the kind of talent that can emerge the reader into the scenerio you create,skilfully written as always~Graham.
Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on January 30, 2013 08:05:11 AM Report
Powerful writing, Dean.  I thought I understood this until about halfway through, then I got lost...   I wonder...  Anyhow, I am impressed by the obvious depth of feeling here.  Strong stuff!    David 




 


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