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Author Name: FreeTomahawk 5 Comments
Date Added: February 15, 2013 23:02:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: General/Word Banks Add To Favorites | Text Only
Word Bank Challenge -- Lofty Asperations --
On the porch of his House on Cyber Island, he spent the afternoon playing his Flute
hoping that he could give Rise to a Song, to make his symphony career take root
It was sink or Swim for him, for he knew that he was running out of precious time
if someone with his talent didn't make the cut, it would absolutely be a crime
He reached out to the calm of the Sea and focused sight on a certain point of note
Wise was he, using vivid imagination, in writing a piece where the ideas  Float
first on his mind....the challenge, where he knew his music could make the  heavens Sing
his inTent and goal was the symphony woodwind section, with the Gentle tones his flute would bring
Author's Notes:

Replying to Dave's word bank challenge....thanx dude!

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Comment By: FreeDean on February 16, 2013 12:00:00 PM Report
This could be developed to a full scale novel, Tom. Simply beautiful setting, ~Dean
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 16, 2013 10:04:45 AM Report

Dang, Len; awesome.   Feels like writing also.  Great seeing your work in a Word Bank.  


Lady D

Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on February 16, 2013 09:28:57 AM Report

Stunning Len! You always bring a simple list of words to vivid reality! Bravo!!



Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on February 16, 2013 07:57:36 AM Report
Wonderful!  So creative!  I can hear this gorgeous melody; no doubt our protagonist 'made it'  -- and that in the real artistic way as well as winning the hearts of the people.  After all, that was his 'inTent' -- was it not?   Thanks dear Len for joining the WBC  -- Dave
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on February 16, 2013 01:06:10 AM Report

Splendid use of the word bank.



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