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Author Name: Freealiopterix 4 Comments
Date Added: March 06, 2013 00:03:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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So Whistle Wind


So Whistle Wind



So whistle wind I hear your call

The voices in your funeral pall;

Our lost and fallen share with us

Their shock and loss so onerous

For us alive yet set to die

Prepared to with our comrades lie;

Your whistle shriek like banshee wail

Does from our faces pallor pale;

Yet does your breath refresh us now

Does calm the sweats and thus allow

A second wind to fill our chest

Have faith with God in us invest;

O cry sweet wind bring now the tears

Arouse our pride erase our fears.



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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on March 7, 2013 10:35:04 PM Report

I like the way this starts out with a feeling of bravery yet down troddeness and

then moves to renewed hope and spirited heroics. Very nice work.

Linda

 

Comment By: FreeDean on March 7, 2013 04:45:34 AM Report
There is surely something about Wind that amazes us Al. A delightful poem, ~Dean
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 6, 2013 05:38:33 PM Report


Another amazing poem that reache sout  its message....

 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Premiumsammie bagley on March 6, 2013 04:49:38 PM Report
i like the tone you use in this unique poem




 


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