| Comment By: noah count on February 24, 2015 09:21:48 AM
I certainly hope this not your last post. As someone "not of the faith", and when things start getting a tad rough upstairs,
I have no one to turn to except my brutally honest gemini common sense. A couple of slaps to the head and I'm good to go.
You raised your questions well. Nice job noah
| Comment By: Michelle on May 6, 2013 10:18:19 AM
You come to me..says she.
She smiles, and says everything be ok..and for a minute you say ok.
Don't let pain take over, let it blow over.
Good write Graham. Hopefully time will tell for this troubled soul.
Coming on here, and writing poetry is a good outlet. Look at my poems..my pain has been shown in them. I am now seeing the light, and move on from that pain to a light of fun and freedom.
| Comment By: sammie bagley on April 9, 2013 01:07:34 AM
|i enjoyed the read a good poem|
| Comment By: Blake Hightdudis on April 8, 2013 10:54:54 AM
Really enjoyed this very much, very wonderful basically same question,
I have been asking my fiance all weekend.
| Comment By: She Whispers on April 8, 2013 07:25:09 AM
A very interesting poem that does clutch ones heart when you read...
WE all have been there one time or another..
I really belive there is one who will listen if we just talk to him in prayer...
God is always with us ...just believe he is with you always...
Close your eyes and ask for him to give you strength...
Your heavy coat of misery can be taken off.
Texas Hugs and Love ~ She Whispers
| Comment By: Linda Jo on April 8, 2013 02:38:42 AM
|well now you caught my attention...to whom do you turn to when pain gets too much?? the universal question/// I hate it that I don't have the answer but I feel your pain!!. are poets doomed to figure it out on their own? shiiiishhhh! I hate that...don't we all need help?? I know I do. great piece! you struck a chord!! ...and are poets the only ones with feelings that can relate to one another?? I don't want to look to a crutch, do you??|
| Comment By: LindaM on April 8, 2013 01:26:31 AM
I enjoyed your poem and the questions you pose.
I guess each individual has to answer it for themselves.