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Author Name: Freepoematic 6 Comments
Date Added: April 12, 2013 18:04:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
When Amorous Glances Crave

When Amorous Glances Crave



When you look away

I feel an intense desire


When you look at me

I feel - I am on fire


Promise, not to walk away

Or - will set myself afire


Your amorous glances

Stun me - my entire


Not just the red stuff you seek...

I am all yours;

My craving Vampire!


Author's Notes:

The moment that you feel you're ready to give all that you have…

Didn't honestly plan for this, as it was supposed to be about a true love and genuine desire, but somehow it turned out to be a ‘bloody romantic’ one :) 

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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 26, 2013 12:57:25 PM Report

Wow...How did I Miss this one!!  THis is lovely by all means...

 LOve ya! India

Comment By: FreeRegina Woiler on April 14, 2013 09:36:15 AM Report
Comment By: FreeSavannah Collins on April 13, 2013 07:29:12 PM Report
Wow, what a wild, yet enjoyable ending. I love the execution of the poem, and how you worded everything. Very nicely done. Great write.

Comment By: FreeBrian Dziokonski on April 13, 2013 08:52:36 AM Report
I like stuff with a unique twist Dean, Vampire love - my kind of stuff! Bloody Cool! Brian
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on April 13, 2013 01:18:17 AM Report

Nice twist on the normal love poem.


Comment By: Freeleahlopez on April 12, 2013 07:34:02 PM Report

A unexpected ending to a wonderful penned write. Love is magical, it is amazing what we do give away of ourselves.




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