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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 9 Comments
Date Added: July 17, 2013 19:07:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Rose Petals on the Bed

If I wish upon a star, the star would say.

Who lights your world on a dismal day?

No need to look this way.  

 

The nights after glow are because of her!

 

If I fly to the moon, the moon would say.

Who rises for you every night today?

No need to soar this way.  

 

There are no dark moments around her!

 

If I swim the depths of the sea, the sea would say.

Who stops your breath as well as her?

No room for blue in here.  

 

You bathe in a love deeper than me!

 

If I walk the universe, the universe would say.

Who created love that is everyday birthed?

No need to resist her existence.  

 

You have a rose in waiting across the room!

 

One by one time mends the thorns of love.

 A rose yields petals I am so undeserving of.  

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
I pray daily to be always thankful.
For Love


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on August 8, 2013 12:26:56 AM Report

Absolutely divine! You once again make us know what the true meaning of love really is.. All one has to do is close their eyes after reading your piece and let the words carry them away to the softest of dreams where such beauty lies in wait..

 

Loved it!

 Daystar xo


Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on July 28, 2013 09:06:02 PM Report
My friend, you are so deserving of love's petals. This is almost too sweet. Hold on to your love, baby. The world can be awfully cold without it. Nice work. ML
Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on July 19, 2013 12:01:16 PM Report
this is beautiful.  i am at a loss for words a very sweet love song . always maggie
Comment By: FreeRegina Woiler on July 18, 2013 08:22:46 PM Report
I am jealous!  Just kidding---it is a lovely sentiment and I enjoyed the visual visceral rose petal floating down.  I also like the font, or is it Italics that made the words almost seem to sway in sync with your context.  Well done.
Comment By: FreeKatie on July 18, 2013 04:57:17 PM Report
This poem is so beautiful with romantic imagery.  Katie  :)


Comment By: Freeleahlopez on July 18, 2013 11:07:55 AM Report

I loved this poem the very first moment I read it, well done Dan!

 

MITZEE

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 18, 2013 11:05:52 AM Report


This is just so beautiful..I am at a loss for words.... Rose petals on the bed.... Mmmmm

 Your such a romantic woman love that in a man....

 Hugs  and Love ya! ~ India

Comment By: PremiumLindaM on July 18, 2013 09:04:31 AM Report

Very romantic poem Dan.

Linda

Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on July 18, 2013 08:43:23 AM Report
This is really a beautiful poem, so full of love and hope.




 


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