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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 2 Comments
Date Added: June 12, 2014 09:06:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Restless Spirit
He felt humble before her whispering passionate spirit
for he was so sensitive to her enthralling beauty
and the mystic charms of her loyal presence

 He wondered with urging matters of his own aching heart
 yellow shadows shaded around him in his twilight world
under the golden embrace of the cascading moonlight 

It was a rare man that understood and saw
the copper rusting in a pool of  past tears

She impressed  it upon his own consciousness as he read 
to understand why she guarded  her wounded heart
with such defiant stubborn pride 

  He must learn to kneel in respect humility
in that moment of his heart knowing


 Then a strange sustaining vision atmosphere appeared 
he wanted his words to lifted her up with his wings

The human mind makes tragic mistakes sometimes to save face
it occurred to his mind that his heart had deeper meaning

 Should he take her gently to his chest and lull her body
with loving kisses and awaken her restless spirit
Author's Notes:
Not even sure when I wrote this poem it needed changes and still not happy with it .....
Oh well its just emotions at the time....A dream I had some years back...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelface on June 20, 2014 02:27:12 AM Report

This poem was very deep. I CAN FEEL THE CREATIVITY IN BRINGING the reader into its COURSE. I hope someday my prince awakens my soul everyday with his love. Awesome write.. 

 

XxxAngelfacexxX

Comment By: Freewalter stephon holloway on June 12, 2014 01:08:01 PM Report
yes he should go gently into her night




 


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