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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 9 Comments
Date Added: July 08, 2014 13:07:26 Average Score: 9.8
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Type: Free Verse
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My View of You

Peace can come from many directions at times.

The sky illuminated in your eyes is peaceful,

 But to only a few.

But the aura around you is a powerful statement too.

 When you walk into a room silence rules. 

 

A hush all around the world.

 

If Beethoven had met you today we would have his

 best performance ever.

 And if Picasso had seen you he would never paint again.

 

Perfection is hard to compete with.

 

 Yet your life leads by an example that humbles us all.

 For your blush would announce joy of the

 tiniest flower over shadow by a rose.

 

 You see life in all.

 

And I learn yesterday that there is joy and pain

in our journey. But the joy always

forgets the pain like childbirth.

 

 A new beginning for us all.

 

 I guess there are many ways to express oneself.

For most people today just say

 I love you without knowing why or

 how to embrace the moment to savor later.

So with that in mind.

 

 

 I will remember to thank you

for being you

 and still look for your gifts

coming from heaven.

Author's Notes:
Nothing like the real thing.
This poem should hit home for the love of your life when first meeting them.
Everyone should take someoneís breath away!! For itís what the heart sees is what really matters.
 For over time that part of you will never fade away.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMaya on August 26, 2014 05:53:24 AM Report

you are special indeed, love this , really lifted my mood loads,loads...Thanks Dan. just me...
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 17, 2014 06:03:05 PM Report

"I love you without knowing why"


 


We can never know why, but we know it in our bones when it's the real thing. Lovely, Dan...len


Comment By: FreesHeRi on July 16, 2014 01:06:03 PM Report
Sounds like your heart knows this women and it is leading your pen. Very nice dedication and visualization of the amount of appreciation you have for her..god molds one just right for each of us. great job. 
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on July 15, 2014 06:29:09 PM Report


I like the line, "for most people today just say I love you without knowing why"...in contrast your poem gives strong reasons for your love.  That is the most sincere declaration of Love.  You have given her reason for confidence and no doubt she radiates the love she feels.  Nice job!

Linda

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on July 15, 2014 04:40:02 PM Report
Sounds like a shining testament to a truly inspiring and loving muse ~ nicely done! LTK
Comment By: FreeTristan on July 13, 2014 05:33:05 PM Report
As Beethoven let us hear the sounds of his passion and Picasso lets us visualize his thoughts of beauty, you have done the same with words. You have captured the essence of an experience of beauty and wrapped your passion around it.  Then you described your experience with artistic and aesthetic language so you could share the beauty with others.  I guess this is, truly, how we hold angels in our hands -- and in our minds.   Nice work, Dan.   Tristan
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on July 11, 2014 06:31:24 PM Report
I don't know who this was intended for, but you have the women swooning with this one Dan. There is a very lucky woman out there and I hope she knows how lucky she is! Great writing Dan.    Henry
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 10, 2014 11:18:28 AM Report
My goodness ....how you embrace the readers with your wonderful heart felt poems...

You have always been so special to me ....Your a true and loving spirit


 Your poems give us all hope and courage to march forward life is so short..

 God gives us all strength to get through the rugged pathway called ...Life!!

THank you for writing this.... It's made my day....Hugs and LOve ~ India.

Comment By: TrialJanette on July 8, 2014 06:18:33 PM Report


I love it, feels like you wrote it for me too.

I look for little gifts and reminders from heaven everyday.

LOVED IT!

jsbuchanjx 






 


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