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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2014 09:09:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Untamed World


                        Between the burning fire and certain death

where the shy moon hides the burning sun 


Repeated thunder shouted to the listening
summer ruby and pearl clouds 


 Frigid screams of the dangerous wild
 it calls out to untamed animals
awaking my

Native American emotions


Powerful horses with thundering hooves
running through my Indian soul 


 With my gasping breath held tight in the
clutching  winds taking a part of my mind


 Yet, now I still tremble with disbelief of the
emotion thoughts on canvas of natives culture 


 Overwhelmed by the thunderous  roaring
of my searching  echos of my listening heart 


Nature showers colored leaves gently on
my wet mascara face of molesting tears




 The mistrusting and collapsing world
knows no one or does it even listen

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Comment By: Freecolin skilton on September 24, 2014 08:01:50 PM Report

such pain my dear friend.

but life has a way of fighting back and with good friends will survive.

i hope one day the buffalo will again thunder across the plains and the mustang run and scream 

their joy of being untamed and free to roam while the cougar lets us know he is there and the wolf joins the chorus.


Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on September 24, 2014 12:35:15 PM Report
The words speak of pain and sorrow; so heartbreaking - I hope its not something bothering you my friend... LTK ~ Joe
Comment By: FreeTomahawk on September 24, 2014 12:10:15 PM Report

Hey India, is everything okay? This seems to be a very troubled work for you, hopefully nothing in your life! Hit me back, lemme know.


Hugs and love.

Len (Eagle Flies High)


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