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Author Name: Freetimespell 3 Comments
Date Added: March 04, 2015 05:03:21 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Grieving & Loss Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Stand Strong
Through sandy dunes our eyes did pierce
this common foe of history's fists
For in the skies no birds shall sing
of whispering bullets, man made things.
 
My body shakes from head to toe
as another bomb takes forty souls
Stand strong we shout, screaming lungs
amongst the slaughter, ones so young.
 
Battered faces now draws us all
I watch my best friend take a fall
Stand strong he cries, blood filled eye's
I have to hold him till he dies.
 
Now in the shadows of the dark
I kill each one within my heart
Stand strong I shout, again, again,
to win this war, and stop this pain.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on March 14, 2015 05:00:20 PM Report

Strong emotions that are very moving - well done!

LTK

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 11, 2015 11:14:58 PM Report

Powerful & descriptive. Well done!





~Barbara D.
Comment By: Freenoah count on March 7, 2015 10:17:27 PM Report

Pain and sorrow are powerful muses.   "I kill each one within my heart"  AS WELL YOU SHOULD









 


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