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Author Name: Freetimespell 4 Comments
Date Added: July 29, 2015 20:07:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Observances Add To Favorites | Text Only
time just spins in our heads
a second of a moment you said.
I guess your telling me so
you said, you said...
Reaching on out to the best
just another second you said.
No need I know what you said
you said, you said...
Catching all the fire of souls
no worries I don't need to know.
Oh yes I remember all  the words 
that you said. you said, you said...
you said, you said
time just spins in our heads
a second of a moment you said.
I guess your telling me so
you said, you said...
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Comment By: FreeMichelle on August 16, 2015 07:20:34 PM Report
Love the analogy of time as do just seems to keep going no matter what happens in it. I would wish I could sometimes stop, rewind, re-record some events but I guess that would make things change as a consequence having seen too many movies where it goes wrong..take Butterfly Effect etc.
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on August 14, 2015 12:23:58 PM Report

Time - the ultimate tool of what will be remembered or forgotten...


Comment By: Freenoah count on July 30, 2015 05:42:12 PM Report

Time, like the East comin' to get ya'.  Though, you do seem quite prepared.




Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on July 29, 2015 08:45:31 PM Report

I like this write.  Reminds me of those feelings.  Keep up the GOOD writes.


Lady D


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