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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 0 Comments
Date Added: November 29, 2015 11:11:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Dedications Add To Favorites | Formatted Version
Critical Hit -- Free Verse/Dedications

Cold grip Of anguish Of doubt Of helplessness What did I do What did I say What do I do What do I say Blindsided by misplaced anger Sucker-punched by someone I care for So badly I feel So bewildered So lost Frustration, Doubt Disillusionment Sadness, Fear Confusion Why must I feel this way Why did it come to this I do not want to fight But the shots have been fired My pain seen as nothing My shock seen as an opening No help to be found Nobody else cares Nothing makes sense I want to run I want to disappear I want to be free Of this anguish Of this sorrow Of this betrayal Tears will not fall Anger will not rise Energy will not recover Sapped of the fire I drift cold and alone Not sure of anything Anymore ...
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Dedicated to those who have been betrayed and/or cut deep emotionally by those who are supposed to 'love and care' for them...

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