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Author Name: Freepoematic 7 Comments
Date Added: January 18, 2016 21:01:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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Made Me Feel Alive Again
   
 
Made Me Feel Alive Again
 

For months as the seasons danced
To the music of falling leaves and bare trees,
did not realise the passing of time and all around
The orchestra performed without a conductor
The conductor was naked amongst the trees
mingling with leaves.


Everything moved
seemed in fluid motion with minds of their own
and indeed they had,
Just did not register in the mind of mine.

Time,
tardily went passed

Things,
moved with rhythm, lento
Until I felt a noticeable tremor!
didn't realise at first, took no notice
did not know it was indeed an earthquake
followed by eruption of the volcano

She spread the heat
With every path she beat
Nervous I felt as heat from lava began to greet
Could not escape
Had to face it, and not give up the seat
yet endure the heat
with pounding heartbeat
let the eyes meet

She showed me the pen
Alone I was in my den,
Could hardly breathe,
I was alive,
Again . . .
    

 

 


 

Author's Notes:

Theme continues from the previous poem . . . "And Comes The Time"

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRobin on April 17, 2016 12:25:26 PM Report
A very special write. Well done
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on January 27, 2016 07:37:21 AM Report

Dean your an inspiration to achieve perfection in writing for me. I am so humble to read such heart in words. thanks


all your poetry is deserving to be bound in leather for the world to read.


Comment By: Freeleahlopez on January 24, 2016 10:06:41 AM Report
Wow... The time away has actually created a whole new you! I have missed you more than words can say. You will always be in my heart and the very breath I take. This has to be your best poem to-date! Who ever this blessed woman is...she sure has brought new beginnings. Love to see more of your emotions sink through your pen.

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 21, 2016 11:00:59 PM Report

Very well done - truly captivating!

LTK

Comment By: FreeChristina Lynn on January 20, 2016 12:22:44 AM Report
Welcome back Dean and thank you for sharing this special right with us
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 19, 2016 01:18:10 PM Report

My goodness I could feel the poem...

I have missed you and your gifted pen...This is so beautiful

Comment By: FreeWaseem Akhtar on January 19, 2016 11:12:37 AM Report
Abs, some"times" making others even just "by feelings" happy, is equal to bringing lively hopes within again...awesome wrote ! :)




 


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