Today Is: Tuesday, July 16, 2019 11:02 AM. Our Topic of the Week: Quagmire
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: Premiummazurekd 3 Comments
Date Added: January 27, 2016 07:01:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 1
Unique Members: 1
Guests: 413
Total Views
Members: 7
Unique Members: 7
Guests: 819

Type: Rhyming
Category: Love Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
“A Wintery Mix”

"A Wintery Mix”

 

A cold chill went through

my bones today.

 

Reminding me winter bleached

 the sun away.

 

But: "Oh” how a true love can

 warm ones soul.

 

You will never experience it

 I've been told.

 

So walk over the past that’s

cover with snow.

 

As hot tears melt the slush to

 make you whole.

 

No winter’s blast can extinguish

a burning soul.

 

Hearts wrap together no winter

can turn cold.

 

For the tiniest star "SHINES" for

a wish to own.

Author's Notes:

 A remix of winter

thank you for reading a snowflake to melt by your heart

 

Report Offensive Poem.

'“A Wintery Mix”' Copyright © Dan J. Mazurek
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeShereen Dudeja on February 4, 2016 09:00:33 AM Report
Oh! This is so beautiful, I fear words will do injustice. Loved it in every way. 
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on February 2, 2016 09:18:22 PM Report

It is very imaginative to see snowflakes as tiny stars.  Loved the contrast between the icy conditions of winter and the warmth of true love. So,  you were told you would never experience true love...seems like you've proved them wrong.   Now we will be seeing snowflakes in a new way, they do have that sparkle. 

Ljo

Comment By: FreeDean on January 29, 2016 09:15:59 PM Report

Dan, I must be an amazing feeling to experience a true love and see what is like. 'A burning soul', indeed 'No winter's blast can extinguish it', and sounds like this poem came from one such soul.

~Dean





 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 62
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday


 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

Creative-Poems.com
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2017 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.