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Author Name: FreeTagen_Lily 3 Comments
Date Added: July 17, 2017 12:07:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Love/Fantasies Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Love Drunks
We kissed all night under the stars
I didn't know you had come from the bar
I alone in your eyes
Dark winter skies
 
I sigh
Such beauty unblemished by time
Holding you, holding me
Whiskey breath on our teeth, breathe
 
You taught me how to fly
Cinders from our cigarettes
Ignite the sky like fireflies
My heart beats
And I smile
 
 Crazy reservation style.
Author's Notes:
Drunk and homeless
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Comments:
Comment By: Freenoah count on September 1, 2017 11:00:44 PM Report
This piece is almost as powerful as the author's note.  Well done.  n


Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on August 29, 2017 01:25:32 PM Report

Of love and regret - so very moving.

LTK

Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on August 12, 2017 04:09:33 PM Report
Beautiful and sad at the same time. Felt the words in my heart.




 


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