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Author Name: Premiummazurekd 6 Comments
Date Added: February 13, 2020 07:02:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Free Verse
Category: Dedications Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
My Points of View

The moon has a collection of dreams turned into dust.

Promises forgotten here blanket it's cold crust.

The remains of realty destroyed by broken trust.

To me you become precious like Jesus Himself.

You suffered and rose up forgiving all around you.

There is this ever present purity about you.

You give others what you desire to be given to you. 

While I am deeply in love with my friends: Paper and Pen.

I can right some of the wrongs in this life.

I can give brief hope in this unjust world.

To turn some dreams into reality.

 And dance with love beyond any other.

A world found deep inside.

Words seeking refuge outside.

For a love that can't be denied.

To make a feeble effort to express "I love you".

That the angels will applaud well above the blue. 

To make a permanent mark on society as a temporary resident.

Poetry is my hidden agenda to be myself beyond everyday eyes.

Yet it’s impossible to forget someone to thank for saving your life.

I live and embrace each day since your touch.

 I would still be a shell left up on a dusty shelf.

I found a pearl inside just in time from you. 

 I will express those words forever outside till I meet you again.

And to whisper them back with the wind blowing thru your hair.

 With the smell of coconut oil on your skin.

 The true essence of us through thick and thin.

 

 

Author's Notes:

It is better to give then to receive. But you will find one day you have received too. And will take each day left Paying it forward.

Memory is a gift to relish those moments.

I am smiling because of you.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on April 1, 2020 12:25:13 PM Report
great work


Comment By: TrialJillian on March 23, 2020 10:31:10 PM Report
Heartfelt write, Mr. Dan.  I always enjoy your work.  It is me....Jillian.  I look forward to you reading my work.  I always cherish your work.
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on March 22, 2020 07:10:35 PM Report

the mystery here lies in the fact that this poem is about two people. The feminine point of view and how it effects and relates to the masculine point of view.  We learn more about ourselves when we look deeper into the character of another. We grow and accomplish so much more when we are engaged in this intriguing  relationship. Poetry is one way of  expressing it while another person might be creative and express it in a totally different art form.  Anyway you made us think...love a poem that does that for me. I could be "way off" but I enjoyed your poem for what it taught me.

Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on February 25, 2020 09:18:23 AM Report

Dan -- I enjoyed this work;  It took me a while to understand the gist of this work;  As a poet, How can we, through our life's lens, make a difference in the world around us.  God has given each of us gifts  to use as tools to effect our world.  All the OT Prophets sought reveal God's vision and will through the voice and skill God gave them.

 

I am reticent to make suggestions but, in the first line" everything is in the past tense, except the verb, "Turn"; I recommend the use of "turned" instead.

 

Bruce




Comment By: FreeDean on February 19, 2020 06:36:03 AM Report

Dan, what a lovely 'points of view'. Loved it all. We all should be smiling because of that special someone. . .

 

Hope all is well

 

~Dean

Comment By: Freeleahlopez on February 18, 2020 12:40:28 PM Report

Excellent poem, Dan.

 

I have always given too much it seems.

I give people my love but then they take it away and destroy it





 


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