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Author Name: Freesweetlilbaby 14 Comments
Date Added: October 17, 2003 22:10:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When you love someone
When you love someone so deep inside,
 It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.
Every day you would hope and pray,
 That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally complete.
You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.
 He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
 All you wanted to do was curl up die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.
One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were untrue.
Two days later he was back the same,
 You thought you were the one to blame.
He thought the relationship was getting to serious,
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.
You thought that you would marry him someday,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You watned things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.
It was a Saturday night about ten O'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
 You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeZoocatcj on October 27, 2004 01:58:12 AM Report
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL.
You write so honestly and truthfully. you have an amazing talent.

btw. i also live on a farm, but i hav horses not cows. hahaha

again. great honest write.
Comment By: FreeJake R. Parsons on June 3, 2004 02:52:00 AM Report
How true! You said it! Great poem :)
Comment By: FreeShareece on May 17, 2004 10:05:25 PM Report
hey i can relate dis reminds me of someone i use to know..nice, keep writing
Comment By: FreeLubaina on May 11, 2004 04:26:15 AM Report
Strong feelings ...expressed beautifully...
Lubs
Comment By: FreeT. S. Hulse on December 31, 2003 01:42:45 AM Report
Theres deep emotion in this, good job.
Comment By: FreeBollimuntha venkata Ramana on December 15, 2003 04:30:22 AM Report
heartfully expressiooooon
Comment By: FreeJessique on November 21, 2003 02:13:50 AM Report
This poem is very truthful, because just like you I can relate to every single thing in this poem.
You have expressd yourself well.....
Great write
Comment By: FreeBlake Sims on November 1, 2003 09:06:08 PM Report
im so sorry.let me know if thers anything i can do to make it better.blake
Comment By: Freelily on October 21, 2003 08:06:05 PM Report
your poem is so pretty, and it is heart touching. lily
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on October 21, 2003 12:34:14 AM Report
A most sad poem. One day this shall be a shadow of a memory to you. So shed your tears tonight. for tomorrow the sun will rise. Even if it is cloudy.!
Comment By: FreeKarina on October 18, 2003 11:47:16 PM Report
this was really pretty! good job!
Karina
Comment By: Freeshadow on October 18, 2003 04:51:57 PM Report
This is really sad...but very well thought out and put together. Excellent write!
Comment By: FreeRichard on October 18, 2003 04:37:27 PM Report
very pretty poem , great job
Comment By: FreeRyan Meckes on October 18, 2003 01:41:43 AM Report
this is too sad jen. I am sorry this happened to you though.




 


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