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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 6 Comments
Date Added: October 22, 2003 08:10:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I'm Yours (Revised 11/30/03)
I look at your face and I crumble
Your eyes tear through me like glass
I search for the words but I fumble
I'm caught in your trance as you pass
There's something about your mere presence
Something about you that's rare
I can't hardly squeeze out a sentence
It's all I can do just to stare
The smell of your skin makes me dizzy
A scent that I miss when it's gone
And, oh, how it feels when you kiss me
An instant, it doesn't take long
I feel you before you can reach me
I've memorized every touch
I'm learning the things that you teach me
Enjoying it all very much
Your breath is like sun through a window
Your voice makes me weak in the knees
I never know where to begin though
I'm yours to do with as you please

I look in your eyes and I'm frozen
Lucidly lost in your gaze
Admiring the girl that I've chosen
Amazing in so many ways
There's something about you that gets me
Something about you that awes
I only do what my heart lets me
It's all I can do to just pause
The smell of your hair is uplifting
It falls all around me like lace
Through tens of emotions I'm sifting
Lost in the look on your face
I taste you before you can kiss me
I've sampled it so many times
I carry your heart, always with me
And hold it as if it were mine
Your eyes are a deep shade of emerald
Your smile has me head over heart
No better a beauty in this world
I'm yours and I've been from the start

I look to the sky and I'm speechless
I don't even know what to say
No higher a feeling could reach this
I'm here and I'm planning to stay
There's something about you that's priceless
Something I can't quite explain
There is no emotion quite like this
It's all I can do to stay sane
The warmth of your body beside me
Sensation that calms all my fears
The fire that's burning inside me
Released after so many years
I hear you before you can mention
I've imagined it so many ways
You've definitely got my attention
You fill every one of my days
Your words are poetic and honest
Your love is a breath of fresh air
So I'm making you a new promise
I'm yours and I'm going nowhere
Author's Notes:
Trite? Yes. Cheesy? Yes. From the heart? Absolutely!
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeshanan on January 4, 2004 10:29:37 AM Report
wow, this is the first poem i've read on this site that has really impressed me. congrats. your poems are very good.

Shanan, 25
Comment By: FreeJessique on November 10, 2003 01:45:07 AM Report
To be honest I never knew that type of man excistes but again you show me, you are not like any man I have ever known. Keep it up Jake, this piece is beautiful.
Comment By: FreeAngela on October 22, 2003 11:52:50 AM Report
Thats all that matters is that its from the heart. i wish i had someone who would write me something like that that is completely 100% sooo sweet.. you are absolutely wonderful Jake..Keep Writing..love ya
Angela
Comment By: FreeJeff on October 22, 2003 08:51:14 AM Report
You are one outstanding writer Jake.
This poem is wonderfully written.
Jeff
Comment By: FreeDenel on October 22, 2003 08:32:51 AM Report
what a beautiful write Jake - she's very lucky to have you
Comment By: FreeCaryn on October 22, 2003 08:20:27 AM Report
This is a beautifully written poem, Jake, full of emotion.
~Caryn~




 


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