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Author Name: Freedyoung 11 Comments
Date Added: October 22, 2003 22:10:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Freedom
I'll no longer look into a thousand sunsets
And wonder whether or not you've seen them.
Nor will I ache at the mere sight of your pictures.
The songs that once stirred me have ceased to be anything but music.
You've become simply a ghost in the uninhabited house of my memory...
Once haunting; now but a fleeting shadow
Who struck the chords of harmony in me
But now hits nothing but off-key heart strings.
I don't hate you.
For hate would be an expression of emotion.
I feel nothing for you.
Freedom sometimes follows war.
And, though it lost, my heart fought it's best.
And now my soul is free.
Author's Notes:
Written 1992. This was written to my first adult heart break.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelique on February 4, 2007 01:54:06 PM Report
Congratulations on the award. All though this is very melancholy, there is a certain liberation when you can finally say that they no longer get to you. Lovely expression.
Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on January 31, 2007 04:49:30 AM Report
In spite of the end, it retains a bittersweet feeling. Congratulations on another winner, Dori.
James

Comment By: FreeA.P. on January 30, 2007 11:37:26 AM Report
excellent expression dori, congrats on the award, it's nice to release some old ones from the vault and see they are still effective expressions!
Comment By: FreeAdri on January 29, 2007 01:56:18 AM Report
A wonderful piece!!  Congratulations!!!!!!
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 28, 2007 06:57:48 PM Report
Dori:  congratulations on this Feature Poem Award. 

 

Lady D

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on January 28, 2007 06:41:37 PM Report
An oldie but a goodie! Congrats on the award Dori, Joe
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 6, 2004 11:48:07 PM Report
"Once haunting; now but a fleeting shadow who struck the chords of harmony in me but now hits nothing but off-key heart strings." This is excellence. This whole work is excellence. Good for you, Dori. ML

Comment By: FreeTimespell on January 30, 2004 05:27:32 PM Report
Such is love...great in love
But torchere without..
A heart felt poem:)
~Timespell~


Comment By: Freejess on November 14, 2003 05:19:35 PM Report
great poem!
Comment By: Free M. Fey on October 24, 2003 05:41:25 PM Report
What a beautiful, eloquent poem. You're good.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 22, 2003 11:31:31 PM Report
NOW THIS SOUNDS LIKE HOW I FEEL ABOUT A REALATIONSHIP..WHEN IT S OVER ITS OVER!!! SHE




 


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