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Author Name: Freedyoung 3 Comments
Date Added: October 24, 2003 17:10:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Eyes, Hands, Mind
Blue, like the color of burning stars
With flashes of white lightening.
Pregnant with feeling both painful and lost.
Loving and soothing, wild and frightening.

Hot and safe, the touch of shelter.
Dry in the heaviest of storms.
Strong like the power of God almighty.
Speaking without any words.

Ensnaring; a trap for thought unsuspecting.
Able to grow gardens of dreams.
Eliciting emotions by words unspoken
And magical worlds unseen.
Author's Notes:
Written in 1993. This was written about someone I cared about very much. Someone who was not good for me at all, but I loved, nonetheless.
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Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 14, 2004 11:13:22 AM Report
Dori of the amazing phrase, this is beautifully descriptive of intense emotion. Great word choices. This makes me want to rewrite my work. Very good. ML
Comment By: FreeRamfire on October 30, 2003 06:52:21 PM Report
Nice descriptions of how one person can affect another.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 24, 2003 05:37:02 PM Report


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