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Author Name: PremiumWislars 13 Comments
Date Added: January 07, 2004 16:01:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Moon Sublime
As I look out my window tonight,
I see the moon, waning bright.
It shines across the cold white snow,
casting shadows, beside it's glow.
Pine trees stand, so tall and full,
Rooftops covered, in new fallen snow.
Stars twinkle, here and there,
A cold sharpness, to the air.
Soft winds blow, and branches rustle,
Patches of ice, reflect the sculptural.
Snowmen glisten, with bead like crystals,
While carolers sing, dressed as old minstrels.
Winter has come, it is finally here,
Soon we'll have Christmas, and Holiday Cheer.
New Year's Eve, a reflective nite,
Promises made, and then lose site.
Now the moon, rising higher and higher,
Changes all, as it seems much brighter.
A new day will dawn, and the sun will shine,
Then night time again, and the moon sublime.
Author's Notes:
Something that just came to me one night
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Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on February 24, 2008 07:12:39 AM Report
Beautiful write and the flow is wonderful~the Moon has always helped to start
my creative vibes going.

Comment By: Freejag on March 8, 2005 05:18:35 PM Report
Super rhyme that flows with ease
Comment By: FreePeter Williams on February 1, 2004 07:56:01 AM Report
very nice write,
congrats. :o)
Comment By: FreeKelli on January 30, 2004 10:44:04 AM Report
Great read as always Wislar! Congrats on your award! It is well deserved!
Comment By: FreeChristina on January 28, 2004 12:50:22 PM Report
Congrats on the award, great work
Comment By: FreeCeeCee on January 27, 2004 08:26:25 PM Report
Beautiful description of a moonlight winter night...congratulations.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 27, 2004 06:34:03 PM Report
This is a lovely poem.It deserves the blue ribbon,here.I would take pride in that before being published in's anthology book.I got published there but,I could have done that feat by submitting my laundry list.You should read some of the embarrassing garbage they publish.This poem is too good for them.I doubt if anything but a computer read it there...len
Comment By: FreeTL on January 27, 2004 07:30:32 AM Report
Beautiful poem; deserves the award!
Comment By: FreeVictoria on January 26, 2004 09:56:51 AM Report
Absolutely, excellent write!
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on January 25, 2004 09:49:09 PM Report
Very nicely written, as usual,
with your work.....

Margaret...the Bag Lady
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 18, 2004 11:29:16 PM Report
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 15, 2004 12:44:33 PM Report
Wislar, this is very descriptive. A beautiful picture in words.

Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreeDenel on January 7, 2004 04:24:27 PM Report
nice picture you've painted


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