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Author Name: Freelubaina 4 Comments
Date Added: February 11, 2004 14:02:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
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NO ONE CAN EVER TAKE YOUR PLACE







Your kind heart, smiling face,






Each step you took with such grace,






As now you have left an empty space,






No one can ever take your place.













A grave shame, who were we to blame?






As God came, taking you away,






All we do now is pray, not knowing what to say,






On the hot night in october, our last day.













Our heads are bowed low, the pain trying not to show,






Sitting here reminiscing, we began missing,






Our uncle, our friend, we can no longer pretend,






As much as we hate it, he's dead.













You have reached eternal life, forever free,






A journey we will all take,






As you stare down and smile,






Awaiting our arrival.













For now your memory still shines bright,






Inside us all, not allowing us to fall.






As we all stand tall, the way you would want it to be,






As once more I will see your face,






No One Can Ever Take Your Place!




















In loving memory of my uncle ABDULLA
Author's Notes:
THIS POEM IS DEDICATED TO MY UNCLE ABDULLA I LOVE HIM TOO MUCH
LUBAINA
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on March 1, 2004 01:46:53 PM Report
Lubaina- I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, you demonstrated a great love for your uncle and the wisdom of knowing the reality of your loss. Please accept my condolences on your
family's loss.

---Poetrydad---
Comment By: FreePeter Williams on February 29, 2004 07:37:41 AM Report
excellent dedication. very well written
Comment By: FreeBollimuntha venkata Ramana on February 12, 2004 07:22:01 AM Report
so sweet
Comment By: FreeVictoria on February 11, 2004 02:46:45 PM Report
Excellent write.




 


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