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Author Name: Freeasiemek 6 Comments
Date Added: April 09, 2003 14:04:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Indifference
I offer you my help, though you don’t need it.
I give you my best wishes, though you always exceed them.
I give you my prayers, though you’ll never know it.
I lend you my ear, though I can’t solve all your problems.
I offer you my hand, even if yours is stronger.
I offer you my support, though you don’t lack confidence.
I smile at thoughts of you, though you don’t see me.
I give you my heart, even though you won’t give me a second glance.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSasha on May 19, 2004 02:09:56 PM Report
Abby,
This is so good! So well written, very easy to relate to. Such a nice use of repetition, some people kill their poems with it, but you did such a nice job. Thanks for a great poem.
Sasha
Comment By: FreeLucinda on September 24, 2003 09:16:46 PM Report
Good job!
Comment By: FreeRichard on August 13, 2003 06:01:59 PM Report
very good ,so well written with feeling,keep it up
Comment By: FreeStill on May 10, 2003 09:44:04 PM Report
Awww this is sweet, and sad. Very well written. Good job! Keep 'em coming :)
Comment By: FreeTony Nguyen on April 9, 2003 05:49:14 PM Report
This was a really awesome poem.After readin it a few times it was definitly 1 of da better 1's I read 2day.Well done.
Comment By: FreeAndrew Timko on April 9, 2003 03:52:48 PM Report
If that comes from the inside like I think it does, I know exactly how you feel. I've been in the same position before several times. It's a nice write.




 


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