Today Is: Tuesday, November 19, 2019 08:10 PM. Our Topic of the Week: Quagmire
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: Freetimespell 5 Comments
Date Added: February 19, 2004 08:02:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 184
Total Views
Members: 7
Unique Members: 22
Guests: 808

Type: Unspecified
Category: Inspirational Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Visions
I scribble down notes
pull out my hair
try to catch glimpses
of these places to share

As fast as I see them
the quicker they fade
flashing visions
from a cosmic charade

Two men shaking hands
,hands on the hill
never ending paradise
holds all the frills

Then with a flash
it all disappears
a big bright light
takes hold of my fears

I try to run for cover
but nowhere is near
I must be a sleep
inside of my fears.
Author's Notes:
Report Offensive Poem.

'Visions' Copyright © Timespell
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 20, 2004 02:14:41 AM Report
They fade quickley eh! Sometime dreams are more real than reality itself. Well done Paul!

~Barbara~
Comment By: Freenanette on February 19, 2004 12:10:22 PM Report
Exceptional job, on a wonderful experience!! I see them too, but chalk it up to just a dream!!
Thank you for sharing your insight!
Thank you
~Nanette
Comment By: FreeJennifer on February 19, 2004 09:07:38 AM Report
I do so like this... You put into words, how i feel,because I feel. Again I really enjoyed reading this!
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 19, 2004 08:42:08 AM Report
Timespell, this is very good. Sounds like an interesting experience though....


Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreeSusan on February 19, 2004 08:31:32 AM Report
Nicely done
Something almost like dejavu
Do come see me too won't you?
I am new here
Susan~




 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 50
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday


 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

Creative-Poems.com
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2017 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.