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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 5 Comments
Date Added: March 01, 2004 01:03:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Leave Me Only "Ands"
Eliminate the ‘ifs’ and ‘buts’
And leave me only ‘ands’
Rise above the scrapes and cuts
And formulate new plans

Subjugate the ‘hows’ and ‘whys’
And try to see the ‘whens’
Learn from all my prior tries
And stand to fight again

Disregard the ‘hims’ and ‘huhs’
And make my own mistakes
‘Cause in the end it is as was
And I must still be Jake
Author's Notes:
Again...just snuck its way out. Blame my subconscious :)
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeartandsoul on July 30, 2004 03:39:11 AM Report
Very clever and witty Jake. I still haven't read one that's not worth reading......
Tanya
Comment By: FreeKeri on March 2, 2004 08:38:26 AM Report
This is so clever...The rhythm is right on and it all makes sense. LOL. You can safely consider me a "fan" of your work now. So, I think I'll go away and leave you alone for a while now. I'll be sure to check back later. Again, great job!
~Keri~
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 2, 2004 12:51:20 AM Report
'ands and when' are more positive than 'ifs, buts, how and why. Hims and huhs serve little purpose either.
I get a positive feeling when I read this, feels like a new beginning! =))

~Barbara~ *unconscious*
Comment By: TrialAnn on March 1, 2004 05:15:31 PM Report
Very clever write. Nicely done.
Comment By: Premiumwislar on March 1, 2004 01:48:51 AM Report
isn't is amazing how our subconcious mind works. great write jake, enjoyed it.

wislar




 


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