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Author Name: Freeasiemek 10 Comments
Date Added: March 07, 2004 01:03:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Why I'm Waiting
During this life Iíve been through,
Iíve oft been asked why Iím waiting.
Listen closely and Iíll tell you,
A serious talk in the making.

Looking at the one to be yours,
And knowing that thereís no other,
Makes for many happy hours,
Anticipating time with each other.

Respecting the greatest gift of all,
Meant only for one person,
Sharing your heart, body and soul,
Waiting is true wisdom.

The truest kind of bride,
I will one day be,
In a meaningful shade of white,
For all the world to see.

Some say thereís much that I will miss,
By waiting until that day,
But being free from worries, risks -
Thereís nothing better, I say.

Why sell yourself short and give in early?
Momentary, fleeting bliss, and then,
A lifetime of regret and worry,
For you and your future wife or husband.

I dream of a time, of a love unblemished,
Experienced the way itís meant to be.
Ever after, for eternity, forever promised,
This is what matters more to me.

Who wants to tell their wonderful fiancť,
About their less-than-perfect past?
Next time youíre tempted and wondering what to say,
Just think about how long it would last.

Wouldnít you rather look into your promised oneís eyes,
Full of devotion and love,
Knowing that you share nothing but truth, no lies,
And that youíve been blessed from aboveÖ

You see, this is what Iíll have someday,
When the time has come and itís right,
For me and for my beloved, who also feels this way,
Truest lovers on our wedding night.
Author's Notes:
a boy who really made me think...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSweetSunshine on August 20, 2004 12:38:45 PM Report
excellent write...I love this piece because it reminds me so much of myself and what i'm waiting for it's a good message keep it up!!

**hugz**
kate
Comment By: FreeLubaina on April 29, 2004 06:16:20 PM Report
Wonderful as always ....my friend ....u have some excellent pieces on this site ..congrats for writing with such deep thoughts
Lubs
Comment By: FreeJake R. Parsons on March 21, 2004 06:02:17 PM Report
EXCELLENT! Definitely wait for a guy who deserves you! Wonderful poem and a lot of insight behind it! Good thinking Abby!
Comment By: Freecarlos stephens on March 18, 2004 07:04:40 PM Report
A very intelligent write Abby, patience be a virtue, have a good life. carlos
Comment By: FreeBollimuntha venkata Ramana on March 11, 2004 01:52:08 AM Report
so nice and good expression
Comment By: FreeDavid Liebeg on March 9, 2004 12:05:14 PM Report
Great write. Good words of wisdom.
TheWolf
Comment By: FreeCeeCee on March 7, 2004 08:01:39 PM Report
Abby...you are so right...this is the most wonderful gift you can give your new spouse on your wedding night...very wise and so well written.
Comment By: FreeWilliamGoldenpen on March 7, 2004 05:23:21 AM Report
This is a wonderful write my friend. If only we could turn back the clock! There is much wisdom in this poem that especially the young amongst us would do well to ponder. Well Written Abby.

William.
Comment By: FreeJake R. Parsons on March 7, 2004 02:06:31 AM Report
It's absolutely refreshing to hear this perspective! Everyone should read this! Excellent poem with a superb message. Values and morals breed class and kindness! Great work!
Comment By: Premiumwislar on March 7, 2004 01:27:07 AM Report
This is a wonderful write Abby, and I applaud you on your determination to wait. Keep up the good work.

wislar




 


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