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Author Name: Freedyoung 2 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2004 17:03:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Nostalgia
This pencil is rusty at the work
It once so easily produced.
But life has once more breathed a name
That has this hand seduced.

Freedom has come in a memory;
In the sound of your laughter cascading;
In the thought that we were once so young;
In the knowledge that old wounds are fading.

Looking back, the image is shrouded
In a mist of both scent and sound.
It smells of obsession. It sounds like a lesson;
In life, a love lost, and a friendship found.

Author's Notes:
In 1999 - my high school sweetheart and I found each other's email address and phone numbers on a reunion website. Bad memories and a terrible breakup were replaced with maturity, stories of our children, and nostalgia. Written in 1999
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on September 9, 2004 09:43:58 PM Report
Simply amazing Dori. Lovely poem indeed.

Sharon Jorcil-James
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on March 14, 2004 10:04:32 PM Report
This is good, Dori. i like the idea of the pencil being "rusty" but the hand being "seduced", I like the phrases "the sound of your laughter cascading" and "the image is shrouded in a mist", I like the rhymes, I like the poem. Nice work all around. Mary Lou




 


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