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Author Name: Freetimespell 2 Comments
Date Added: March 22, 2004 13:03:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Bang Up
Bang up,

What can one say?

You know the clocks a ticking,

Every second of the day.

Conscious of the moments,

That are dwindling away.

Studied every inch,

You're the guest, of hear to stay.

Just flickering flashbacks,

From that ill forgotten day.

Remembering the words,

Take him away...

Locked up, for you're cock ups,

Now there speeding you away.

Slammed up, crammed up,

It's the price you've got to pay.

Mumbling to yourself,

As there stocking you away.

Remembering the words,

Take him away...

Night enters day,

Day follows the night.

You find yourself a routine,

Then you fall a sleep at night.

Wide awake you daydream,

But you are still inside.

Reality engulfs you,

In the middle of the night.

Invaded by you're daydreams,

The ones you hold so tight.

Remembering the words,

And how you've paid the price.
Author's Notes:
Written 11 dec 2001
Long,long time ago
i can still remember
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Comment By: Freemelanie del valle on April 1, 2004 03:24:08 AM Report
really enjoyed it : the concept and everything about it really ! great write!!
Comment By: FreeJeff on March 24, 2004 08:48:17 AM Report
Wonderful piece of writing...very impressive.


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