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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 7 Comments
Date Added: April 06, 2004 07:04:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Heart
My heart, it got the best of me
My hopes, they masked the truth
My fears, they held the rest of me
From looking at the proof

My heart, it had its way with me
My eyes eclipsed my mind
My tears, they did not stay with me
They only made me blind

My heart, it played its tricks on me
My dreams, they ran the show
My fear, it simply picks on me
This feeling wonít let go

My heart, it showed the worst of me
My love, it hid the facts
My tears, they seemed to burst from me
I could not take them back

My heart, it had itís own desire
My goal got lost in lust
My fear, it only fueled the fire
That turned this heart to dust
Author's Notes:
Felt like posting something and this was the result. Suggestions welcome!!!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLubaina on April 27, 2004 06:58:22 AM Report
Your poetry is very nice. Great Poem!! written
from the heart full of love and feelings!!
its definately going in my favs
LUBS


Comment By: FreeDiana on April 11, 2004 01:15:05 AM Report
I really like this poem. I'm speachless so I don't know what else to say.
Diana
Comment By: Freemelanie del valle on April 9, 2004 12:16:23 AM Report
fabulous poem.... could definitely be a song... :)
Comment By: FreeJocelyn on April 7, 2004 07:51:13 PM Report
wow great poem Mr Jake.. Amazing is all I have to say.

~Hugs
~Jocelyn
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 6, 2004 11:19:59 PM Report
I have a lump in my throat so I know I'm feeling this poem very deeply! =(((

Often we only see what we choose to see...or maybe it's true, maybe 'love is blind' (??)

Awesome write Jake!

~Barbara~

Comment By: Premiumwislar on April 6, 2004 09:55:04 AM Report
Amazing. your words are very touching Jake. not bad for something just slapped together. one suggestion though, add the word "with" first line second stanza and it will be perfect.

wislar
Comment By: FreeKeri on April 6, 2004 09:52:12 AM Report
Don't you dare change it! This is perfect. No additions, no changes, no alterations whatsoever. This was very descriptive. Another perfect poem for the perfect edition. Great job! Well, off to class now. Will drop by again later.

Always,
~Keri~




 


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