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Author Name: FreeWolf 5 Comments
Date Added: April 07, 2004 14:04:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~A SHIP *TO*HELL~
SHE AWAKENS IN A HIGH~PITCHED SCREAM SWEAT AND TEARS ROLL CHILLFULLY DOWN HER BURNING HOT CHEEKS AWAKEN BY A DREAM SO FULL OF REALITY HER HEART IS UNEASY AND HER THOUGHTS ARE SPINNING INTO A GALAXY ALL ITS OWN SHE SITS UP AND SHE CAN STILL FEEL THE NIGHTMARE EMBRACE HER CLAMMY SKIN SHE FEELS AS THOUGH THE EVIL PRESCENCE THAT HAUNTED HER IN HER COLD DARK DREAM SITS BESIDE HER GRINNING REVOLTINGLY WIGGLING LIKE A WORM ON A HOOK SHE BEGINS ROCKING BACK AND FORTH ON A SHIP HEADED FOR HELL FEELING AS THOUGH SHE WILL NEVER EVER YELL AGAIN by Mark B.
Author's Notes:
I woke up last night and the first seven lines to this poem just popped into my head.:) I might change the title, later on.
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Comments:
Comment By: Premiumsammie bagley on February 19, 2013 08:40:12 PM Report
a very interesting poem one i think many can relate to as well as myself you did an excellent job writing this
Comment By: Freemeg on April 24, 2004 12:29:36 PM Report
i've really had that happen to me before, and they had to take me to a hospital, they said i had wave or something that was disrupted
Comment By: FreeKat on April 8, 2004 05:09:06 PM Report
line 22 to the end are great:SHE FEELS AS THOUGH
THE EVIL PRESCENCE.... this is yet another fabulous poem. great job, mark.
*kat*
Comment By: FreeKeri on April 8, 2004 12:12:49 PM Report
The first 7 lines are sweet. Very descriptive. As a matter of fact, the whole poem is chillfully descriptive. I know this feeling and you've hit it very accurately. GREAT job! Into my favs.

~Keri~
Comment By: FreeWhitney on April 7, 2004 06:26:48 PM Report
Very well written and very descriptive i like the last line in the poem it seems to linger in my mind. good job!




 


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