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Author Name: Freewalshy 15 Comments
Date Added: April 08, 2004 18:04:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Watched While You Slept

Shh, softly, gently, I dare not wake her, this Angel by my side
I dare not whisper her name as a smile
Plays across my lips, that
I have no fear to hide
Where has she gone in her dream?
Do we hold each other's hands?
Do we dance?
Do we stand on a mountain top?
Or a rocky shore by chance?
Am I there?
Do we make love?
The Cosmos in all it's glorious wonder
Passes by over head
The night and Father Time marches slowly, inexorably, relentlessly forward
As I lie next to her in her bed
Can she grow to love me, this Daughter of Eve?
Would she, could she, should she;
Yes even that
If ever I would have died
At my graveside, like Juliet
Would she have wept?
All this passed through my mind
As I watched, while you slept.

Author's Notes:
We have all done this. Every single person on this planet looked down on the object of our desires while they were sleeping
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKymberly Donn on May 13, 2012 09:20:44 AM Report
Stunning! Poetry at it's finest as is evidenced by the award.



Anna

Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on January 8, 2010 06:51:16 PM Report
This is just a slice of heaven to read on such a cold blistery night.  Thanks for warming me up.  Wonderful poem.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 18, 2007 09:17:27 AM Report
Walshy:  you are taking over as a Feature Poem Winner!!!  Super congrats --- obviously YOUR TIME HAS ARRIVED !!! 

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 18, 2007 03:08:03 AM Report
This is really soft and beautiful.  Congratulations on winning feature for this piece. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 29, 2004 02:43:53 AM Report
Such longing in this, Walshy...This is a beautiful piece,as I'm sure she was...len
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on October 25, 2004 08:13:33 PM Report
Great work Paul. I like the range of "thoughts" you portray.
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 30, 2004 09:43:56 AM Report
Beautiful! I've watched over my husband as he sleeps at times, wondering the same thoughts you have penned so beautifully here...I've watched my children in their sleep, smiling at their giggles and murmurings as they relive some happy moment in their dreams.
A wonderful write...

Glata
Watching over the ones I love as they sleep....
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 17, 2004 02:42:13 PM Report
Gentle, heartwarming, poem expressing such tenderness. Who says that the age of romance is dead?
Comment By: FreeJayakrishnan on August 16, 2004 07:19:02 AM Report
Excellent write.
Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on July 31, 2004 11:24:25 AM Report
this is beautiful!
Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on May 7, 2004 04:53:50 PM Report
Entranced...this is an excellent write, it drew me right in.
It is beautiful and written in such a different style to the 'norm'
Loved It!!!
Nik
Comment By: FreeKelli on April 9, 2004 09:38:07 AM Report
Paul,

This is beautiful. What a gentle, sensual write. Loved it!

Kelli
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 8, 2004 11:00:09 PM Report
WOW, HAVE WE ALL LOVED LIKE THIS??
I THINK SO...ITS BEEN YEARS SINCE I HAVE FELT LIKE THIS TO GAZE UPON THE FACE I LOVE AND WANT...EXECLLENT MY FRIEND SHE
Comment By: TrialAnn on April 8, 2004 07:08:18 PM Report
This is such a tender and sensual write. The feeling of love is so wonderfully expressed. Nice work.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 8, 2004 06:57:19 PM Report
This is written incredibly well Paul!

There is a soft wonderment expressed here...this questioning is an exploration of her thoughts and feelings...are you seeking to discovery of how much of YOU her heart holds?

Beautiful poem! Welcome back Walshy!

~Barbara~






 


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