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Author Name: Freedyoung 11 Comments
Date Added: April 16, 2004 23:04:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Eyes of a Child
I walked around in a world too big
For one as small as I.
There was no wrong my eyes could see;
No reason for me to cry.

They said we were the young and weak,
But soon to be the strong;
That we could make it all okay,
What they had made so wrong.

We all had heros and special friends;
Some real and others not.
We all had a place to get away;
A secret hiding spot.

You were mine, my special friend,
My place to hide away.
I loved you till the day you left
And I love you still today.

If for one day I could have you back
For just a little while;
I think I'd be content for life
To see again through the eyes of a child.
Author's Notes:
To the child I was and to my imaginary friend (who was a unicorn).
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Comments:
Comment By: Freebloodtear on December 9, 2006 09:18:46 AM Report
this was such an adorable poem! I had imaginary friend too, her name was Pepper lol. I often try to think back on how childhood was, the world seemed so perfect then, untill you grow up.

This was fun to read, and very well put together. all the best hun

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on May 22, 2005 07:13:27 PM Report
I love my childhood days, so much so, that I choose to look at movies and listen to music from those days.
This is a fine piece of nostalgia.
Fantastic Dori.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: PremiumPaul on May 21, 2005 03:25:11 PM Report
I loved the instantanious image that the line "Iwalked around in a world to big" brought about. That described the feelingMany Moons ago when I was young and also the days went on forever.
Paul
Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on August 20, 2004 12:04:08 PM Report
This is brilliant, i would love to be an innocent child again...oh well...lol
Brilliant write
Nik
Comment By: FreeAidan Jojhenson on July 19, 2004 06:30:48 PM Report
ohh! that is really sweet! And a very good write.. Great!
Aidan
Comment By: FreeDenel on April 27, 2004 11:20:47 AM Report
excellent write Dori! if only we could for just one moment turn back the hands of time!
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 19, 2004 10:42:30 AM Report
Dori: how refreshing. Great way to uplift your spirits on a bad day. I think this will go into FAVS for my down days..

Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreeJennifer on April 19, 2004 10:18:49 AM Report
I love this!
Comment By: FreeTimespell on April 17, 2004 06:35:02 PM Report
Dori~
This is a great poem..!!
Really enjoyed reading this one..So did my mate(Smiles)
All the best
:O)~(O:
~Timespells~*****
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on April 17, 2004 07:25:15 AM Report
Why am I not surprised that young Dori would have a unicorn for a best friend? It's fitting. It doesn't even surprise me that she would remember that. This beautiful, Dori. I love it. ML
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on April 16, 2004 11:18:42 PM Report
I love unicorns. cool write. the child you were??? I still love to stay in touch with my inner child.(makes me feel young(er)). Gay




 


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