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Author Name: FreeDaniel1983 4 Comments
Date Added: April 20, 2004 20:04:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Alone


Here I am alone in my bed

All these old things popping up in my head

Making me want to just end it all

I try my best but just can't stand tall



God I Can't take it any longer

I'm sick of all this hurting & anger

Everyone's running away from me

Causing my life to be very unhappy



I've been bitter & unhappy since a young age

Sometimes I go off on a bitter rage

Never thinking about who i'm hurting

I only think about myself & i'm loosing



I can no longer fight this battle

It's starting to get unbearable and awful

Loosing ones I once adored

Broken friendships that can't be restored



Hoping no one have hard feelings towards me

From being so unhappy and pushy

What ever I was put on this earth for

I hope it wasn't just to be a bore



So i'll just stay in this little dark cave

where i'm slowing digging myself a grave

It's always so dark in this cold place

In this world I feel so misplaced.




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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCHRISSY on June 22, 2007 02:35:51 AM Report

Wow, yup, another one like me, except I can be so bitter from those who keep hurting me.  Keep writing; you have talent and I like the way your words flow.


Comment By: Freenanette on July 14, 2004 07:34:43 PM Report
Daniel,
You have a tremendous talent, for soul searching!! If I could ask you a favor, just one simple little favor..Collect your thoughts and write a funny or happy little poem, better yet make it a happy long poem...I want to see how truly talented you are..I am sure it will be amazing..
Thank you, my sweets
~Nanette
Comment By: FreeMary AnnieA.V. on May 13, 2004 03:17:17 AM Report
this is good in write..tho a bit to the dark side..i wish ud really try to get over this depression(IF it is real)..and stay alive..
o i'll just stay in this little dark cave
where i'm slowing digging myself a grave
its no good doing that..do try to do something about being cheerful and thinkk bright..May God bless allowing HIS light shine thru.yeah ..love..anna maria
Comment By: Freelamzy on April 26, 2004 04:36:17 AM Report
I can really relate to this, thats exactly how i feel, a great write i agree with alexy you have a beautiful way with words, good job :)




 


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