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Author Name: FreeJam 6 Comments
Date Added: April 21, 2004 14:04:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Eyes
Thinking of your eyes,
Sweet intense surprise.
What wonders do they see?
Do they hide secrets for me?

Thinking of your eyes,
Pale windswept skies.
Beautiful soul's hidden clue,
Fell through them into you.

Thinking of your eyes,
Shining goddess's prize.
Gaze melting me apart,
Leaking through to my heart.

Thinking of your eyes,
Their wonder never dies.
Author's Notes:
This is for the girl with the beautiful eyes, and is part of a series the titles of which spell out "Your Eyes / Won't Read These Lines / I Wrote For You"
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCandy on January 24, 2006 10:15:26 AM Report
beautiful!!
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on October 3, 2004 04:40:48 PM Report
I know a male version of eyes like those. Great Write and another favourite.
Cat
Comment By: FreeAndrea D. Carlon on June 12, 2004 07:45:35 AM Report
Beautifully written. I loved how it flowed and how it rhymed. Very sweet and romantic. Whoever you give this to, I'm sure, will be one happy, moved gal. Great job!

-Andrea-
aka Andy
Comment By: FreeAmanda W on May 6, 2004 06:20:57 PM Report
WELL WRITTEN! SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL

Comment By: FreeAbby on April 22, 2004 03:41:47 AM Report
wow, that's awesome! especially
"Beautiful soul's hidden clue,
Fell through them into you."
that's so cool!
~Abby

Comment By: FreeDarsha on April 21, 2004 06:47:38 PM Report
Don't make her wait too long...




 


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