Today Is: Sunday, December 15, 2019 05:16 AM. Our Topic of the Week: Quagmire
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: Freejamimaman 5 Comments
Date Added: April 21, 2004 20:04:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 69
Total Views
Members: 0
Unique Members: 36
Guests: 541

Type: Unspecified
Category: General Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Perfection
and in the fault I find the most beauty the delicate feeling of the flaw stunning and precious imperfections that illustrate credulous creativity in those astounding atrocities existing (perfectly imperfect) allotting those confined by pride an opportunity to see that be not beauty in the eye of the beholder but in the soul of the inadequate flawless blemishes formed by God in natures delight allowing all to see perfection in such an imperfect light
Author's Notes:
I dont feel really comfortable with this one yet. It still needs some work. I put it up for others to share ideas. Share away! Thanx!
Report Offensive Poem.

'Perfection' Copyright © tommy
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeHeidi on August 2, 2004 08:30:20 PM Report
Khiss, I really like this poem a lot - especially the "perfectly imperfect" saying...I don't think it needs anything else, but if you are not satisfied, by all means - make it that much better - its great already.

Heidi
Comment By: FreeKeri on May 17, 2004 04:29:13 PM Report
Tommy,

I don't think it's imperfect at all. Why? Because this one speaks to me. It's very...honest. It's beautiful. Well worded and expressed. You've done an incredible job.

~Keri~
Comment By: FreeLubaina on April 26, 2004 02:31:12 PM Report
Good write
Lubs
Comment By: FreeAbby on April 22, 2004 03:24:56 AM Report
very beautiful, the epitome of poetic sounds! creative and original :)
~A~
Comment By: Freelamzy on April 21, 2004 09:12:44 PM Report
I think the last two lines are brilliant, i like it as it is.. i woulndt over work its perfectly imperfect.. illustrating credulous creativity.. lol ok im gona stop it now.. great write tho :o)







 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 79
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday

Glata (53)
Royce Emley (78)

 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

Creative-Poems.com
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2017 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.