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Author Name: FreeJakeInAZ 7 Comments
Date Added: April 23, 2004 05:04:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Write Some More
My perspective paints a portrait;
Every stroke in black and white
All my wonder freely moving
Slowly coming into light

False dimensions, twisted edges
Every angle sharp as glass
All the words I fail to mention;
Every pain that came to pass

Melted pieces, glowing embers,
Every speck that stayed behind
All the things I still remember;
Lovely thoughts inside my mind

Slightly tangled in this torment
Every line, it leaves me sore
But I revel in each moment
And I come to write some more
Author's Notes:
Just kind of a journey through my writing least sometimes. Anyways, if it makes sense to someone then I'll be thrilled :)
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Comment By: FreeSadey on April 7, 2005 12:43:53 AM Report
I like this one very much. I totally thought it was about something else. Just bye reading the title. You are such a good writer. Thanx for shring your creativity !

Comment By: Freeartandsoul on July 26, 2004 04:33:36 AM Report
Another one for the favorites file! This makes perfect sense to me, you just express it way more eloquently than I could!
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on April 27, 2004 01:43:43 AM Report
Dear Jake-
I think Len nailed it right on the head-
I often describe things about life even I don't understand-
But others do-
That is the form of a great writer-
Sometimes we intercept thoughts so fast it just spills from our minds to our hands-
Often are you impressed by what your thoughts just created when you finish a piece-
By reading your work as long as I have the
answer is more than likely yes-
I am always impressed with your versatility
of writing topics-
Your poems cover such a wide array of life-
May your thoughts continue to touch the minds of many-
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 26, 2004 01:30:08 AM Report
I think this is a great description of the processes inside the mind of a writer.Should I worry that it makes perfect sense to me,Jake??
A writer writes for the same reason a bird flies..It's what he does...len
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 24, 2004 06:55:43 PM Report
'Lovely thoughts inside my mind', for sure!! This one is very descriptive, I love that. All around a great write! =))

Comment By: Freemelanie del valle on April 24, 2004 12:01:18 AM Report
the visual effects of this one are astounding!
great write!
Comment By: FreeKeri on April 23, 2004 02:33:25 PM Report
Write some more! Write some more! Uh....yeah. Do that. It does make sense. A writer's write of writes...



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