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Author Name: Freelubaina 16 Comments
Date Added: May 02, 2004 05:05:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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You left footprints on my heart....
Even though your not here






I think about you all the time






It's hard without you near






I cry and nothing seems to rhyme






How am I suppose to go on






Not having you to hold






My hopes and dreams seem gone






And life feels empty and cold






I miss you more than you know






And I wish that I could bring you back






But I can't just let go






My life doesn't work like that






You left footprints on my heart






Therefore I could never forget you






I feel like I'm falling apart






And I don't know what to do






You filled my life with joy and laughter






You were a dream come true






I thought we would live happily ever after






And that God would see us through






But he took my Angel from me






My one and only Son






He left me here to see






That this battle I haven't won






I really don't know why






He took you away from me






He only made me cry






And left me on my knees






Praying for you to play with me






And be by my side






Praying to not be alone






And wishing you hadn't died






One day we will meet again






I will see you at the golden gates






But I really don't know when






Until then my heart will ache






You are and will always be






My son for all eternity






Author's Notes:
For my one and only son I miss you sweetheart... Lubs
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Comment By: Freeabby on May 3, 2004 04:44:22 AM Report
The uncalled and unasked chopping of the rich portions of our heart, doubtless is traumatic. I have lost parents, 2 sisters and a brother. Often you ask heavens unanswerable querries - why these cruel, unannounced ordeals. But then life is death, life. Our hearts may weep endlessly for the departed, but they are not gone, they rather pity us from the divine safety and bliss of heaven. I charge you therefore to have the consolation and peace that some day we all shall converge at that expected congress, removed from the rain-like tears and bulbous shrouds of our searing earth. Your son surely must be proud of you especially for this golden tribute you wrote of him.
Comment By: FreeLiz Hurley on May 2, 2004 01:08:46 PM Report
That was absolutely beautiful. It was so moving. And I'm so sorry for your loss.
Comment By: TrialAnn on May 2, 2004 12:16:32 PM Report
This is such a very sad and tender write. I'm not sure I would be able to even write a word if that happpened to me. You are brave and loving to give such a lovely tribute.
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on May 2, 2004 11:53:50 AM Report
Dear Lubaina-
There was one line in particular that got me-
I miss you more than you know
I would like to believe
that sometimes when we have a piece of our heart removed it is never actually gone-
And there are times we are thinking about them because they are thinking of us-
We are being tested continually
So believe in things you can not see
When we need them they are near
All those that we hold so dear
Here times measured on a clock
There it really has no stock
Here our appearance says who we are
There they just shine like a star
So remember when you hear their voice
How you perceive is by your choice
They're standing close to catch your tears
So all your prayers do reach their ears-
This was a wonderful write-
Best Wishes~
James
Comment By: FreeRonald Hamilton on May 2, 2004 11:49:09 AM Report
nicely written
ron
Comment By: FreeWilliamGoldenpen on May 2, 2004 11:43:31 AM Report
The pain that you feel we share with you Lubs. Such a sad poem. The pain that you feel must be one of the worst kind, when a mother looses her child in death. A poem of a mothers love written beautifully.

William.
Comment By: FreeBollimuntha venkata Ramana on May 2, 2004 10:48:43 AM Report
I am very sorry to hear that. I have seen a beautiful mother in your poem and also ur son alive in ur memories.
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on May 2, 2004 09:37:19 AM Report
My heart goes out to you friend..! Your poems are quite heart touching..! I was once told and still believe that if we just simple remember those who have pasted before us. They are never truly gone..! Your poems are beautiful rememberances of your son..!
Comment By: FreeAnGeL on May 2, 2004 09:29:32 AM Report
omg this is so full of emotion that it left footprints in my soul
im sorry bout what happened but least you have the memories

for always angel
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 2, 2004 08:39:00 AM Report
LUBS,
THIS IS ANOTHER TEARFUL POEM OF YOUR SADDNESS..SOMETIMES WE JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND..I KNOW I DON'T FOR ONE.. YOUR HEART WILL HEAL MORE EVERY DAY SWEET LADY..
LOVE YOU YOUR FRIEND INDIA-SHE
Comment By: FreePoetic Soldier on May 2, 2004 08:04:33 AM Report
very sweet poem I think the amount of comments and views speak volumes for this poem :)

Poetic Soldier
Comment By: FreeEagle Eye on May 2, 2004 07:54:35 AM Report
This made me want to cry...I think it was very well written you captured my emotions.
Comment By: FreeCLM on May 2, 2004 06:58:44 AM Report
This a very beautiful and touching poem.So sad......
Comment By: PremiumRajalaxmi Vasudevan on May 2, 2004 06:40:32 AM Report
I wonder how do u stand so much of sorrow..good write though
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 2, 2004 06:26:57 AM Report
It's hard to comment on something this heartbreaking,as a poem.It is a sad and beautifl write.I would change the "drop of a dime" line.It sounds humorous and, I'm sure you don't want thet...God bless,Lubs...len
Comment By: FreeT. Rukshan Perera on May 2, 2004 06:13:44 AM Report
I'm so sorry about what happened, really. It's so painful I know. But all your emotions have enabled the poetic talent within your soul, and the result is a fabulous poem.
The rhyming was perfect, and you ended the poem with a real good line : My son for all eternity.
Great!
~T.Perera~




 


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