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Author Name: Freeasiemek 8 Comments
Date Added: May 04, 2004 02:05:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Until Then
Until the day dawns, shiny and new,
And you start to look at me the way I look at you,
Until the morning birds sing their songs of love,
And Iíve got more than mere hopes and dreams to think of,
Until the sun rises, yellow, orange and red,
And we donít go to sleep, but wait to watch it instead,
Until the birds fly over all the little fishes,
And no longer do I need all my hopes and ďI wishĒes,
Until the snow melts and spring soon will arrive,
And we know just how lucky we are to be alive,
Until the flowers bloom in all their splendid glory,
And that first hard year has become just a story,
Until the sun sets on a world that is right,
And Iíve got more than just your memory with me at night,
Until the moon rises, shining down on the sea,
And the pretty stars outside make you think of me,
Until thunder crashes and the wind howls outside,
And we enjoy the fire and roast símores while we hide,
Until lightning strikes, but I donít really mind it,
Cuz when I need comfort I turn to you and I find it,
Until our stars cross in the heavens above,
Until then, all of this is what Iíll dream ofÖ
Author's Notes:
when waiting is all you have left to do...
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Comment By: FreeRonald Hamilton on May 17, 2004 02:02:59 PM Report
and a lovely dream it is too.
Comment By: FreeLubaina on May 15, 2004 02:10:33 PM Report
Love grows by giving. The love we give away is the only love we keep. The only way to retain love is to give it away.
Beautifully written my friend...
Comment By: FreeJosephInEgypt on May 13, 2004 01:14:49 AM Report
Wow,.. absolutely AMAZING! This is very well done; and I truly mean that because I tend to be picky when it comes to poems that rhyme. I want them to have certain feel and flow, and everything else...In this poem you have done just that!!! You perfectly expressed your feelings, and I am truly happy to have read this. This is going into my favorites folder!

By grace,
Comment By: FreeMark B. on May 13, 2004 12:44:15 AM Report

Comment By: Freetommy on May 7, 2004 09:37:59 PM Report
Such a sweet write abby. Great imagery, made me smile. Keep up the good work.
Comment By: FreeMegan Catherine on May 7, 2004 09:33:39 PM Report
What lovely pictures you've painted with your words. Well done. And best of luck. =o)
Comment By: FreeCeeCee on May 4, 2004 10:47:50 PM Report
That someday will come...nicely done, Abby!

Comment By: FreePoetic Soldier on May 4, 2004 06:44:10 PM Report
Good images come off your words, it was good to read enjoyed it.

Poetic Soldier


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