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Author Name: FreeJam 4 Comments
Date Added: May 06, 2004 13:05:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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He Knows
He knows, he knows,
By his soulís tattered clothes,
That something is wrong,
With his confidence gone.

He knows, he knows,
As his insecurity shows,
That heís covered in sin,
They look down on him.

He knows, he knows,
By the repeated blows
That itís his fault again,
Heís covered in pain.

He knows, he knows,
As his desperation grows,
That his lifeís badly sewn,
When heís left all alone.

He knows, he knows,
When everyone borrows,
That nothing is left;
His entire being bereft.

He knows, he knows,
By the way he follows,
And does what they say,
That heís fading away.

He knows, he knows,
As he dryly swallows,
And picks up the knife,
That heís ending the strife.

He knows, he knows,
As his beating heart slows,
That his debts are repaid,
His soul is remade.
Author's Notes:
This just came to me just now, and I wrote the whole thing straight in about 20min, it kinda scares me tho ;) *Edited 07/05/04: Added last stanza, just came to me, feels like a better ending :)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJocelyn on May 9, 2004 11:51:01 AM Report
Scary but sometimes people go through times like this and not even the ebst help they can find will help them. But this poem is soooooo good hon. Great job.

~Jocelyn >^..^<
Comment By: FreeCandy on May 6, 2004 03:18:58 PM Report
haha a lil scary but a great write!! The ones that come that easy are always the best!!

Candy:)
Comment By: FreeDarsha on May 6, 2004 01:52:16 PM Report
Wonderful!
Comment By: FreeAmanda Boyd on May 6, 2004 01:32:30 PM Report
Wow....that's all I can say... awesome job.
Awesome job on the rhyme scheme too.
Love it!
Amanda




 


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