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Author Name: Freejamimaman 2 Comments
Date Added: May 07, 2004 00:05:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Unsensable
are my senses restricted from seeing the depth of my life could my mind be confined to the superficial things i See the woven intricacies of this world i know are there but my small childish hands are not enough to Grasp all that i can only (for small amounts of time) Touch is the bitter Taste of this life hiding the sweet Flavored delicacies missed by my overzealous tongue and is the cause of this the anesthetic i place there to avoid savoring either and could the soothing soft Sound of my world Heard by my finite mind be drowned by the dissonate uncomfortable Noise created by the society surrounding me or are my Ears made Deaf due to my own desire because the calming Sound is not worth the painful Noise when will the gentle Aroma of things unsensed amplify my mind so that i may know how this life is supposed to be lived soon however my senses begin to wander and i now do not contemplate so critically what this world has to offer my senses and me and i relax... the View of this beautiful world soothes my soul; the soft Touch of these wonderfully woven intricacies still my heart; the Flavor of all i have chanced to taste leave me satisfied and i lay with a contented appetite; the once noisy atmosphere loses its tense tone as the Scent of sweet spring fulfills my body and i now can peacefully rest....
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unsensable because some things i cannot sense.... unsensable because sometimes i do not give myself a chance to sense....
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Comment By: FreeKeri on May 8, 2004 12:33:01 PM Report
This is a wonderful write. It's so full of emotion and wonderful imagery. I can feel it, the gentle sway and flow, the peacefulness at the end. Superlative job.

~Keri~
Comment By: Freejoia on May 7, 2004 04:48:41 PM Report
Sometimes a whisper can be louder than words and patience gathers not misdirection but truth. Your poem is so enlightening, and well written. joia




 


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