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Author Name: Freelubaina 7 Comments
Date Added: May 26, 2004 00:05:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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So Close, Yet So Far..............
Our love started over the net






and everything seemed almost perfect then






We had never met but the love we felt






was so big and true already,






and could only become complete






by meeting each other.













The very first day I saw you in person,






we held one other so tightly ...






we didn't want to let go,






and time stood still.






We had a perfect day






and we knew it could only get better






and better if we only stood by each other, held, kissed and hugged.






After that moment






we never went through a day






without saying how much we love






and need each other for the rest of our life.













Being far away from you is killing me,






not sharing every day with you






and not being able to hold you






whenever I want, hurts so much






but I know that at the end of all this pain






I will find you again.






You stood by my side,






when things were good and when they were bad, you listened and hugged me saying, "Everything's gonna be okay".













I know we'll have a great life together






and can't wait for us






to be with each other every day,






sharing everyday problems and joy,






without having to leave one another's side. Fate put us through this,






but we'll come out of it all






shining as the love we feel is hard to find.













I'm proud of the person you are.






I love the way you are with me






I'm happy to be with someone like you,






the sweetest and most caring guy






I've ever known.






Don't ever change, Honey,






we're perfect for each other






and it will be like that for eternity.













Love always,













LUBAINA RAAJ






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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKaren Redd on May 29, 2004 03:28:43 AM Report
Is this a true story? Oh I hope so, it's so beautiful! It seems it's written with so much love that it must be. I hope for you that you'll be together soon. Very good. Karen
Comment By: FreeWilliam R. Sullens on May 27, 2004 02:20:51 PM Report
Hi Lubs:
A perfect dedication to the person you love. A very well expressed and written story of your meeting and the story of your love. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us. Bill
Comment By: FreeJayakrishnan on May 27, 2004 09:56:37 AM Report
Excellent write..Lubaina..Really touching especially when you are experiencing a situation similar!! Thanks a lot for posting this...
Comment By: FreeChism on May 26, 2004 05:29:03 PM Report
This is a good poem, it comes form the heart and with that you can't ask anything more.
Comment By: FreeFAITH on May 26, 2004 12:55:09 AM Report
This is a beautiful write!...very heart felt I love it...best believe its goin into my favs.! keep it up!
~Take Care & God Bless~
Andrea
Comment By: FreeCLM on May 26, 2004 12:48:17 AM Report
This is an excellent one just as all your writings are.I can really relate. Good job,Lub!
Comment By: FreeLeigh Star on May 26, 2004 12:42:43 AM Report
aww sweet write

*leigh*




 


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