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Author Name: Freedyoung 5 Comments
Date Added: May 27, 2004 10:05:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Motorcycle Ride to Starbuck's (Naani)
Your body warms me
Wind swirls around me
The world left behind
The road sooths my mind
Author's Notes:
Can it be even syllables in each line? This is my first Naani - be gentle...
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Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on May 27, 2004 09:30:16 PM Report
This is a cool write Dori.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on May 27, 2004 07:10:09 PM Report
What a bike ride! This is so warm and intimate. I love it, Dori. ML
Comment By: TrialAnn on May 27, 2004 04:04:24 PM Report
Great work Dori. You did it all just the way it should be.
Comment By: Freejoia on May 27, 2004 02:57:14 PM Report
This is an excellent Naani in my book, I think you followed the rules and did an outstanding job. Enjoyed the ride, joia
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 27, 2004 11:02:45 AM Report
Dori, this is so refreshing. A Naani is 4 lines with a syllable count to total 20-25...any number for each line is okay just the total is 20-25; therefore yours is EXCELLENT!!!

Lady Dragonwyck: meet you at Starbucks for some creamy flavoured coffee


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