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Author Name: FreeXInsaneX 14 Comments
Date Added: June 02, 2004 21:06:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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That Knife

That Knife

 

She once held this knife

It made all the cuts on her body

She used this knife the very last time

Now she has no worries

 

She is now lying in her own puddle of blood
With her wrists cut wide open

Now here I am holdin this knife

That took her life

 

This knife is tell me to have fun with it

I hear it whispering to me

"You need to die, its your turn now!"

Here I am thinking to my self,"thats not a bad idea"

 

I am holding the knife tighter

Now I am willing to take my own life

Theres no point in life

Now that my one true love is gone

 

Here I am stabbin my self

Feeling the pain and burning

I now watch my own blood flow out of my arm

That DEEP DARK RED

 

I feel very cold now

Here I am dieing

Dieing in my puddle of blood

Just like she did

 

Here I am now

Looking over my Dead Body

I here her

Shes calling my name

 

I turn and look

And there she is

My one true love

I say to her, I AM HERE, NOW WE WILL BE TOGETHER FOREVER!"

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jason Koehler--11.20.03
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeemomuffin on September 24, 2007 02:40:26 PM Report
i love this... i can relate to it i have a nife to, but great write...

 

-crystal*lynn

(emomuffin)

Comment By: Freeemo muffin on October 13, 2006 05:48:15 PM Report
neat wright.seems like my life.
Comment By: FreeRaven on July 9, 2006 02:32:57 PM Report
i feel ya on that i feel like that was me u were writting about
Comment By: FreeJami Renae on December 31, 2005 09:22:15 AM Report
I love this.........Great write!
Comment By: FreeCat on November 22, 2005 01:36:27 AM Report
Love It...
I Can Relate as I have used a knife.
And Have a pritty nasty scare to remind me every day.
Comment By: FreeMelissa Quarles on August 15, 2005 06:07:44 PM Report
this poem I can relate to because I tried to take my life like that before.
Comment By: FreeKasey on July 9, 2005 01:51:18 AM Report
this poem is very sad and that its sad that happen.
but i truly like this poem.
Comment By: FreeMary on April 28, 2005 10:01:43 AM Report
wow this poem is very intense i really liked the imagenation very nice.nicely penned.:0)~*~**MARYANN~*~**
Comment By: FreeAmy on April 21, 2005 06:32:42 PM Report
wow! that's sad!i'm sorry!

Comment By: FreeKathleen Rau on March 6, 2005 12:20:40 AM Report
this poem is good in a writin way.. but the fact that its about suicide... it kills me... i dont like to think about suicide..but keep writin like i said i love ur poems they are awesome
Comment By: FreeKathleen Rau on March 6, 2005 12:20:38 AM Report
this poem is good in a writin way.. but the fact that its about suicide... it kills me... i dont like to think about suicide..but keep writin like i said i love ur poems they are awesome
Comment By: FreeKathleen Rau on March 6, 2005 12:19:26 AM Report

Comment By: FreeCHRISSY on June 7, 2004 09:22:01 PM Report
I use to use the knife..I guess I can relate,
great poem,
Christina
Comment By: Free.. ..Sammi.. .. on June 5, 2004 12:50:06 PM Report
i like this one beacause.. like i said... i can relate to it.. but vice versa




 


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