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Author Name: FreeCat 7 Comments
Date Added: June 07, 2004 14:06:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Murphy's Mad Mondays
“Oh My, its Murphy’s Mad Monday”
Each muttering minute seems to say
A wonderful weekend's, awful addendum day
What else can go wrong, what bars my way.

Muddled Monday, Sunday’s sullen sister,
In my eyes the day’s a tornado, a twister.
The smug sun might shine soothingly,
But light in the storm, I don’t see.

Murphy’s Monday, Lady Luck is late.
All goes wrong, Murphy’s Law of Fate
Every undertaking’s a flaw, a flop, a fight
A stain, a stone, a sting, nothing goes right.

Maniacal Monday, deep, dark and dire
Every talk a fight, all anger, demon’s fire.
Good intentions charred, soot and smoke
On every breath, tickle, cough and choke.

A Silver lining, even in Murphy’s Mad Monday
The next one’s still six days away.
Author's Notes:
I have similar sentiments to Garfield in regards to Mondays
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWilliamGoldenpen on April 24, 2005 10:45:55 AM Report
This is a fuuny write. I know 'Murphy's Mad Mondays' better as "Sod's Law!' Well done Lady.

William.
Comment By: FreeMarian Mason on July 19, 2004 06:00:52 PM Report
Love this and isn't it so true! Murphys Law reigns
Marian
Comment By: FreeKathy on July 8, 2004 05:30:35 PM Report
Awesome peice. I loved the way it flows!
Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on July 2, 2004 03:27:02 PM Report
Anya- This really a neat piece of work, I likes the use of aliteration and word pictures descibing the hearts
feeling. Great work.

---Poetrydad--
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 13, 2004 04:27:45 PM Report
Good work, Anya. Might as well be philosophical about it. Looks as if it's here to stay. Thank goodness "The next one’s still six days away". This is very well done. ML


Comment By: FreeHeike on June 10, 2004 05:52:37 PM Report
This one made me smile. Very cleverly constructed. Bet you didn't write this on a Monday ;-). ~Heike
Comment By: Freejoia on June 7, 2004 03:14:52 PM Report
A WONDERFUL WRITE, WELL DONE. I AM WITH YOU, I LIKE THE LAST FEW LINES, NICE THOUGHT. GOOD JOB, joia




 


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