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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 6 Comments
Date Added: June 10, 2004 06:06:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Devil doesn't dance
Two lovers in the dark night

They danced in the moonlight to the waltz of the stars

Her love for him like Venus his love for her like Mars

The twirled to the Heavens to confess their love

She cried a single white tear he turned it to a dove

His feet touched the ground so she took him high above

But the devil does not dance and did not like what he did see

“Someone will destroy their love it might as well be me”

So the devil whispered in her ear lots of wicked lies

He laughed his evil laugh when he saw sadness in her eyes

She was so heartbroken her other had been untrue

With sadness in her voice she told him what to do

The man he was shocked when his lady called him untrue

“No you are my love I only dance with you”

The lady she did leave him as it began to rain

Her man he then ended his life to take away the pain

The lady when she heard realised she was tricked by her own ear

She took a lethal cocktail her chosen poison clear

In death they dance together in the star filled skies

Look closely through the moonlight

To see the shinning of their eyes

Author's Notes:
Yup afraid boredom strikes again, guess it has a productive effect on me, oh well I like this one so it doesn't matter now if it does well or not. This is for my Dear Friend Erin x Nate
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Comment By: Freecarrie packard on March 4, 2008 07:20:29 PM Report
just goes to show you cant believe everything you hear 
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on July 2, 2004 03:03:22 PM Report
Another one of yours to my favourites list Nate. Its given me the shivers
Comment By: FreeAlisha Rowe on July 2, 2004 01:22:43 PM Report
That is such a sweet poem!! I love your writing style, keep up the good work =)
Comment By: FreeJenn on June 10, 2004 01:40:48 PM Report
Fantastic piece of imagery..I loved every word of it!! Boredum seems to bring about some interesting thoughts, and rockin keep up that whole being bored, works for ya!! Great write!!
Comment By: FreeNiomi on June 10, 2004 09:26:59 AM Report
This poem brought a tear to my eye, excellent writing,
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 10, 2004 07:49:59 AM Report
Nate: this is very good. I really like it...very good write.

Lady Dragonwyck


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