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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 6 Comments
Date Added: June 10, 2004 06:06:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Devil doesn't dance
Two lovers in the dark night



They danced in the moonlight to the waltz of the stars



Her love for him like Venus his love for her like Mars







The twirled to the Heavens to confess their love



She cried a single white tear he turned it to a dove



His feet touched the ground so she took him high above







But the devil does not dance and did not like what he did see



“Someone will destroy their love it might as well be me”



So the devil whispered in her ear lots of wicked lies



He laughed his evil laugh when he saw sadness in her eyes







She was so heartbroken her other had been untrue



With sadness in her voice she told him what to do







The man he was shocked when his lady called him untrue



“No you are my love I only dance with you”







The lady she did leave him as it began to rain



Her man he then ended his life to take away the pain







The lady when she heard realised she was tricked by her own ear



She took a lethal cocktail her chosen poison clear







In death they dance together in the star filled skies







Look closely through the moonlight







To see the shinning of their eyes



Author's Notes:
Yup afraid boredom strikes again, guess it has a productive effect on me, oh well I like this one so it doesn't matter now if it does well or not. This is for my Dear Friend Erin x Nate
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Comments:
Comment By: Freecarrie packard on March 4, 2008 07:20:29 PM Report
just goes to show you cant believe everything you hear 
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on July 2, 2004 03:03:22 PM Report
Another one of yours to my favourites list Nate. Its given me the shivers
Anya
Comment By: FreeAlisha Rowe on July 2, 2004 01:22:43 PM Report
That is such a sweet poem!! I love your writing style, keep up the good work =)
Comment By: FreeJenn on June 10, 2004 01:40:48 PM Report
Fantastic piece of imagery..I loved every word of it!! Boredum seems to bring about some interesting thoughts, and rockin poems...so keep up that whole being bored, lol...it works for ya!! Great write!!
Comment By: FreeNiomi on June 10, 2004 09:26:59 AM Report
This poem brought a tear to my eye, excellent writing,
Nangyni.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on June 10, 2004 07:49:59 AM Report
Nate: this is very good. I really like it...very good write.


Lady Dragonwyck




 


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