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Author Name: Freewilliamgoldenpen 2 Comments
Date Added: June 12, 2004 16:06:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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"Oblivion"
Down...Down...Falling through empty space,
My paler is pale with no smile on my face.

Inside my chest is a heart torn in two,
Down...Down...My life almost through.

My skin is cold, feeling dead to the touch,
My eyes as the blind, I have seen far to much.

Down...Down...Hands once alive, no longer feel,
So too are my lips, no more a kiss to steal.

Ears that once heard, all of loves word,
Are now stopped up so no words can be heard.

Down...Down...Still falling lifeless through space,
Stopping soon and entering deaths place.
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 13, 2004 02:30:38 PM Report
I think you've aced it William. Very nicely done!!

Love the repitition of 'down, down'...it really emphasises your decent to death.

Very well done! =))

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on June 12, 2004 06:09:16 PM Report
Wow. Glad to know that you are ok. awesome write.
Gentle Dove




 


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