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Author Name: FreeGentle Dove 13 Comments
Date Added: June 22, 2004 01:06:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Flood of my Soul
I've discovered a way for me to express,
My heartache and pain, when I'm under stress.
I let my thoughts flow out of my brain,
Tumbling, spiraling through pumping vein.
Some how they reach through this pen I hold,
Bursting forth, their story to be told.

Helter Skelter as I write them down,
Coming too fast, I feel myself drown.
The flood of feelings coming from my soul,
My heart becomes weary, unable to console.
I battle my way up to the surface,
Sputtering, kicking, the flood seems endless.

I see a lighthouse out in the distance,
Beckoning to me with it's flashing guidance.
A lifeline thrown from my very own conscience,
The flood waters recede, restoring balance.
My heart no longer weary, I'm able to control,
The flood of feelings coming from my soul.
Author's Notes:
I may not be very good at writing but it sure is helping to heal my wounded heart.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 7, 2004 12:05:30 PM Report
Well I hope the comments speak for themselves about whether you are good at writing! lol
This torrent of creativity whether in emotion of expression is one so many of us are familiar with and you have handled it with such confidence and skill! Wonderful work Gay.

By the way, I know how happy you are with Richard, when I looked at your pics close up I could see why. You are obviously "soul mates" stands out a mile. I see it accross the eyes! Keep them coming!
Comment By: on June 28, 2004 02:49:05 PM Report
Well said the rest...nice piece
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on June 26, 2004 05:05:30 PM Report
Awesome job of writing, Gay! And know You are a fine poet! I loved this!
Comment By: FreePili Pubul on June 26, 2004 04:24:06 PM Report
Amazing expression of the agony and ecstasis of pouring your soul trough the pen. LOVE IT
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 24, 2004 05:00:52 AM Report
Working through being pen tied?.You express yourself marvelously,Gay...len
Comment By: FreeJennifer on June 24, 2004 12:26:05 AM Report
Each line contains interesting thoughts. 'The flood waters recede, restoring balance' Is definatly my favorite line.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 22, 2004 02:59:11 PM Report
GENTLE DOVE, THIS MY LADY IS EXCELLENT .. YOU HAVE CAPTURED THE WAY I WRIGHT ALLSO.. I WROTE SO FAST SOME TIMES TRYING TO GET ALL MY FEELINGS DOWN.. ***** YOUR FRIEND "VELVET RAVEN"
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on June 22, 2004 02:42:07 PM Report
Dear Gay-
Your not good at writing??????????-
Well my dear friend this is certainly a
masterpiece of thought you have created here-
I thought each word was well placed allowing
the poem to flow through it's entirety
with a pondering grace-
Your talent is really starting to show and
it has been cool watching the depth of your
writing widen-
Your soul has withstood many test in this life
and your thoughts are now rewarded with true
unedited vision-
You are diamond begining to shine through simple written words-
Best Wishes to You and Yours~
Peace~
James
Comment By: TrialAnn on June 22, 2004 11:34:30 AM Report
It is one of the best therapies during different times in life to write. Healing is a gift you give to yourself each day you write. You are writing fine work for the readers and helping yourself too. Keep it up Gay.
Comment By: FreeCarrie on June 22, 2004 10:48:18 AM Report
Gay, I think that you are a wonderful writer. And this poem is very well expressed. I have enjoyed all of your poems. I hope to read more soon.
Carrie
Comment By: Freejoia on June 22, 2004 08:28:08 AM Report
Great write, gay. Some unique lines in this, I like the line about your conscience throwing you a poetic lifeline, prime example of survival. A great poem to start my day off with today, I need some determination, great job, joia
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 22, 2004 04:48:26 AM Report
Gay, this is a marvelous and very dramatic description of the writing process. Good work. ML
Comment By: FreeRichard Johnson on June 22, 2004 01:43:54 AM Report
I am so glad that you found this site babe, it has been such a big help for you in dealing with your family problems. Love ya, Richard




 


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