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Author Name: Freepyrofungus 1 Comments
Date Added: June 22, 2004 14:06:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Horror Add To Favorites | Text Only
"A Beautiful Surprise"
Follow me

Down the hill we go

Through the trees

Into the water

Here put this blind fold over your eyes!

I have a surprise for you!

Now turn around!

Bang! Bang!

Oopsie I didnít mean to shoot you in the head!

It was an accident

Iíll try to revive you myself

Hey maybe being in the water will help you heal

Iíll just sit on the shore and watch you ďhealĒ

Watch as the clear water turns crimson

How beautiful

I love it

Such a nice piece of art!
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Comment By: FreeDevon on October 2, 2005 03:28:11 PM Report
That's funny in a creepy way. I like this.


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